Talk:War of the Coprophages/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Glimmer721 (talk · contribs) 16:28, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

Will review soon. Glimmer721 ^talk 16:28, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

Comments:

• Should "Ekbom syndrome" be capitalized (or at least that way)?
• "Mulder visits the nearby Dr. Ivanov, a wheelchair-using scientist who works on insect-like robots, and renders the man speechless- informing Mulder that the specimen is, technology-wise, vastly superior to anything he's ever seen before." This sentence is a little confusing. Is Mulder the one speechless? Also, the dash needs to be an emdash.
• Do any of your sources mention what "Coprophages" means? Could be added to the paragraph explaining the title.
• You might also be able to get something from here, or at least in the future.

Otherwise this is pretty solid. Man, I really have to rent the third season from my library soon! I'm placing this on hold for 7 days while changes are addressed. Glimmer721 ^talk 22:25, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

OK, I believe I've fixed everything. And Ekbom syndrome is a proper noun, hence the capitalization. It's actually supposed to be Ekbom's, and so I fixed it. I'll also try to add parts from that article later.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:10, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

Good enough for now. Passing... Glimmer721 ^talk 00:02, 9 April 2012 (UTC)