Talk:Warrior-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 12:43, 15 October 2013 (UTC)

I'll aim to start the review for this article tonight. Miyagawa (talk) 12:43, 15 October 2013 (UTC)

• Duplicate links: I count three, Gun turret, muzzle velocity and 1st Cruiser Squadron.
• Design and description: Would be good to link to Achilles and Natal in the third paragraph. They're linked in the lead, but not in the body of the article.
  • All four ships are linked in the table, which is the first mention of Natal and Achilles.
• Modifications: Same as above, but for the first mention of Cochrane.
  • Done.
• Service: Can we add links for Goeben and Breslau?
  • Linked in the lede.

Well the linking is the main thing, which I imagine won't take long at all to fix. I'll keep it on my watchlist and pop back to pass the article once that's sorted. Everything otherwise meets the Good Article criteria. Miyagawa (talk) 20:04, 15 October 2013 (UTC)

• Thanks for looking this over.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:08, 16 October 2013 (UTC)