Talk:Washington State Route 512/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Panini! in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Panini! (talk · contribs) 11:56, 14 April 2022 (UTC)Reply


Reviewin'. Panini! 🥪 11:56, 14 April 2022 (UTC)Reply

I have very little comments for this article, so I'm going to Pass this review right off the bat. Everything here is neatly formatted and neutral and all sources are verifiable. This is all I have for you:

  • "The state government revised its plans for the Puyallup section ahead of construction bidding in 1969 and reduced parts of the freeway to a divided two-lane expressway in the interim to save costs on the $11 million elevated viaduct." This is a long sentence and is difficult to wrap the mind around. Could a comma or semicolon be used to break up tension?
  • I see a {{when}} tag next to "The cloverleaf interchange with I-5 in Lakewood was modified in the late 1990s". It does have a "possibly 2002" comment, but this claim doesn't line up with the "by 1994, approximately 20,000 vehicles used the interchange on a daily basis" statement that follows. Could you find a general source to fix this matter?

Once again, Good Job! Panini! 🥪 12:51, 14 April 2022 (UTC)Reply