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GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:45, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I will be reviewing this article over the next days, please hold on any fixes until I say so. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:45, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
edit- Reference for Indie pop genre? Should also be in the composition
- Citation in composition section editorEهեইдအ😎 03:40, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
Lead
edit- the other third having production from David Newfeld → re-word
- Should make a reference of each single, don' say only "EP was promoted with four singles,"
- The same goes for the music videos and do you know the name of the tour?
- The source I cited for the tour didn't really give the name of the tour, so I can't say. Named the music videos also editorEهեইдအ😎 03:15, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
Production and composition
edit- Flawless.
Promotion
edit- "as the magazine described" → remove this part
- "strong voice." → end quote and then full stop.
Critical reception
edit- "Praises included the use and combination of many styles" → sounds too informal
- "...band." → end quote and then full stop.
- "...chaos." → same as previous
- Should mention Now magazine on the review part as well as Exclaim.ca just like the other magazines.
Track listing
edit- All songs written and composed by Jasmyn Burke and Morgan Waters. → All songs written by Jasmyn Burke and Morgan Waters and produced by them excepted when noted. + add a source
- Burke didn't produce any of the tracks, so I'm not going to add "produced by them excepted when noted" in this case. Also added source.
Sorry, my bad. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:20, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
Credits and personnel
edit- Use
{{spaced ndash}}
- Instead of "source" → Credits adapted from liner notes of Weaves (EP):
Release history
editWhy two sources?
- They're showing the album had both a CD and digital release. editorEهեইдအ😎 03:15, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
References
edit- Fine.
Overall GA review
edit@EditorE: I've completed the review, I'll put it on hold for a week, once you have adressed the issues I raised please ping me.
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: All comments have been addressed. These reviews have been great and very useful in improving my other content as well.
Thanks, glad to see that I'm doing a difference here and there. Passing MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:35, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
Split proposal
editTechnically speaking, an album is not allowed to have an article at all until after the band that recorded it already have an article about the band — and overdoing the content so that the album's article is simultaneously serving as a quasi-band article is not an appropriate way around that condition. And the other problem here is that the band now have a Juno and Polaris nominated album under their belt. This article MUST be split so that the band content is in a band article instead of background in an article about an album whose creators don't actually have a band article at all. Bearcat (talk) 16:38, 13 July 2017 (UTC)