Talk:West Wetlands Park
This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||
|
This article is currently the subject of an educational assignment. |
Photos
editThis is obviously a work in progress. I'll have further comments and suggestions at some point. But in the meantime (and this may be too obvious), why don't some of you all go out and take some pictures of the park? Some photos would be great! --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 04:52, 18 April 2013 (UTC)
- I agree, a few good photos can really enhance this article. How about a map or a few maps? You can request maps at Wikipedia:Graphics Lab/Map workshop once you've defined the requirement. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 14:38, 19 April 2013 (UTC)
The "Animal life" section
editThe section's content is quite muddled and even repetitive. Butterflies are listed as an indented list while birds are listed in a few separate paragraphs, mammals appear to be almost randomly sprinkled inbetween. Creating consistently formatted separate lists for Birds, Mammals, Insects, Fish, etc., would be better imho. (FYI - I'm not involved in the class project.) Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 08:36, 20 April 2013 (UTC)
General Comments about Post from Prof Davis
editFriends at Wikipedia,
I am aware that photos are needed. We are collecting photos. We also realize that the post needs editing. Those are some of the reasons why I haven't linked to the article yet, because I don't want too many visitors.
Right now, we have around 18 students who are adding and editing material, but since we are doing most of this in class, various students tend to work on individual sections at a time. We plan to go over the whole post in a couple of weeks to remove redundancies etc.
I appreciate much of the help we have gotten, and I am so glad the post is up so that students can easily edit at home as well as in class, but I would ask for a couple more weeks for us to work out some of the kinks.
Thanks again,
ProfDavis (talk) 19:33, 25 April 2013 (UTC)ProfDavis
External links modified
editHello fellow Wikipedians,
I have just added archive links to 2 external links on West Wetlands Park. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add {{cbignore}}
after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add {{nobots|deny=InternetArchiveBot}}
to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:
- Added archive https://web.archive.org/20101223113748/http://www.aps.com/_files/renewable/SP016YumaWestWetlands.pdf to http://www.aps.com/_files/renewable/SP016YumaWestWetlands.pdf
- Added archive https://web.archive.org/20130821222424/http://www.ci.yuma.az.us:80/events_15780.htm to http://www.ci.yuma.az.us/events_15780.htm
When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true to let others know.
This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}}
(last update: 5 June 2024).
- If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
- If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.
Cheers.—cyberbot IITalk to my owner:Online 14:07, 26 February 2016 (UTC)