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"where it is found in Southwest Western Australia, southern coastline and Eyre Peninsula in South Australia" This is a little complex for the first sentence.
I wonder whether Gould belongs in the second paragraph of the lead, while the ecological information belongs in the first. I'd say ecology is generally of more interest to readers than taxonomy. On that note, though, I wonder if mention of the eastern yellow robin and of the subspecies of the western yellow robin belongs in the lead.
You're inconsistent when it comes to including/linking specific names and common names, but I don't think that's something to get excited about at GAC. FAC maybe...
Any information about cultural significance? I assume they aren't eaten or kept aviaries...
Culturally, it often mentioned as a familiar sight and sound in SW Australia. The eastern yellow in kept, but I found no mention of this species. If someone mentions the eggs being pilfered for food I will add it when found. ~ cygnis insignis01:59, 19 August 2019 (UTC)Reply
References look fine; I'm not going to pick fault with formatting for a GA review. Pictures look fine. Generally, a very good read! Please check my edits. Josh Milburn (talk) 15:57, 18 August 2019 (UTC)Reply
"The species inhabits open eucalypt forest, woodland and scrub, generally with significant understory, across Southwest Western Australia, southern coastline and Eyre Peninsula in South Australia." I'm struggling a little with this; some wikilinks would be helpful, and the reference to the coastline is tricky. Do you mean something like "...across Southwest [aside: is that a proper noun?] Western Australia, on the southern coastline of South Australia, and on the Eyre Peninsula"? Josh Milburn (talk) 20:01, 24 August 2019 (UTC)Reply
I'm still not loving that sentence, and I ran it by someone else and she thought it was off, too. Can I suggest the following: "The species inhabits open eucalypt forest, woodland and scrub, generally favouring habitats with significant understory. Its range comprises the southwest of Western Australia and the state's southern coastline, and as well as the Eyre Peninsula in South Australia." Does that say what you want it to? Josh Milburn (talk) 17:08, 30 August 2019 (UTC)Reply