Talk:What You See Is What You Get (book)

Needed edits

The lead is actually two run-on sentences (full stop after Alan Sugar) with 3 other glaring errors:

• it's an autobiography,
  
• tells not tell's, and
  
• founding not finding the company.
  

Cheers. — DennisDallas (talk) 03:33, 14 October 2010 (UTC) ^{[Not a vandal. ʘ‿ʘ ]}

 Done AnemoneProjectors already fixed 'em while I was at dinner. Thanks, AP! — DennisDallas (talk) 04:00, 14 October 2010 (UTC)