Talk:Whatcha Think About That

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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
October 8, 2008Articles for deletionKept
March 25, 2021Good article nomineeListed
Current status: Good article

Should not be deleted

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The song received an official single release on September 9, 2008. It has charted. The single is a failure which should be noted in the article. A single failure doesn't mean the article should be deleted because it lacks charts. The music video will be released in a couple weeks. Charmed36 (talk) 19:30, 5 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

Per Wikipedia:MUSIC#Songs "Most songs do not merit an article and should redirect to another relevant article, such as for a prominent album or for the artist who wrote or prominently performed the song. Songs that have been ranked on national or significant music charts, that have won significant awards or honors or that have been performed independently by several notable artists, bands or groups are probably notable." Under this definition, I don't feel this single meets the criteria for notability. It hasn't won any awards, and there are no "notable" chart listings.
There is also already an article for the album, where some of the info is already included, and perhaps the section on the singles could be expanded? But if you disagree about the notability of the article, feel free to remove the "prod" template. Anyone who disagrees about a prod can remove it. raven1977 (talk) 20:01, 5 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

I'm sorry but this is an official single and currently charting. There are other articles with three or four sentences. They have not been deleted. Charmed36 (talk) 23:35, 5 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

It is completely unfair to this article and OFFICIAL SINGLE WHICH IS CURRENTLY CHARTING and has a music video. Charmed36 (talk) 23:37, 5 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

Music video has been released. Not worth deleting imo. Getluv (talk) 21:43, 7 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

Anyone who wants to weigh in on the nomination for deletion is more than welcome to join discussion at its "Deletion Discussion" page here: Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/Whatcha_Think_About_That raven1977 (talk) 23:47, 5 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

The next week after this song was digitally released, it debuted on the Billboard Bubbling Under Hot 100 chart at #108 and fell off the chart after that. I know this as I have a membership to billboard.biz and have regular access to their charts. Whoever keeps changing this number to 100, STOP IT!, especially since I'm citing references and this person has no cite validation. Please and thank you. —Preceding unsigned comment added by I c u trippin (talkcontribs) 08:22, 10 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

This record is no longer an active single. The record label has elected to push "I Hate This Part" to radio. As this record had yet to chart on the Mediabase or BDS Airplay charts, I have boldly redirected the article to the album's article. --Winger84 (talk) 22:08, 12 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

I don't think it should be redirected. It's still a single. The article should remain. Charmed36 (talk) 22:48, 12 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

This record is not a single, per the record label. I'm thisclose to AfD'ing the article. --Winger84 (talk) 19:25, 13 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

The song was released to radio and digital outlets. The video was released. If the song is a so-called "digital single" it's still a single. "Per the record label", it's a cover up for the single disappointment. Charmed36 (talk) 02:33, 15 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

The mere fact that it was released does not make it notable. The mere fact that a video was made...does not make it notable. AfD#2 goes up later today. --Winger84 (talk) 05:39, 15 October 2008 (UTC)Reply
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Orphaned references in Whatcha Think About That

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I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Whatcha Think About That's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "UKSales":

  • From Don't Cha: Copsey, Rob (August 22, 2018). "Strictly Come Dancing: Faye Tozer vs. Lee Ryan vs. Ashley Roberts' chart stats". Official Charts Company. Retrieved August 22, 2018.
  • From Jai Ho! (You Are My Destiny): White, Jack (October 9, 2017). "Pussycat Dolls' biggest singles on the Official UK Chart revealed". Official Charts Company. Retrieved October 12, 2017.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT 10:41, 9 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Whatcha Think About That/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:00, 22 March 2021 (UTC)Reply


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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
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The most recent songs GAN; I will start reviewing this on shortly! --K. Peake 18:00, 22 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  •   Done changed.
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  • Link to the music video in the infobox with the template (LpGFhuokOXw)
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  • "with song's producer" → "with the song's producer"
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  • You should list Mickaël Furnon as being a writer in the above sentence, who "received songwriting credit due to his work being sampled with the pipe and also pipe his name to Mickey 3D
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  • Move the actual sample to being in the same sentence as the electropop and midtempo info directly before the riff, plus just write the artist it is by
  •   Done Moved the sample in the same sentence with the genres
  • "The song was released on" → "It was released on"
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  • "and February 23, 2009" → "and on February 23, 2009"
  •   Done + "on".
  • You should change the role reversal part to being its own sentence, starting with "Lyrically, the Pussycat Dolls..."
  •   Done Included the role reversal part in a new sentence.
  •   Done Removed the year.
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  • "the song's production and Elliot's contribution," → "the production and Elliot's vocals,"
  • Shouldn't you mention Fosse's full name?
  • "The group performed the song in few" → "The Pussycat Dolls performed the song for a few"
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Background

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  • Retitle to Background and release
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  • "by its producer" → "by its sole producer"
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  • "Dean handled as well the vocal production" → "Dean handled the vocal production as well,"
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  • "Aubry "Big Juice" Delaine and Matt Wheeler with" → "Aubry "Big Juice" Delaine, and Matt Wheeler, with"
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  • "Elliott is the first" → "She is the first" to avoid starting two sentences with her surname
  •   Done I'll start avoiding that!
  • Introduce Nicole Scherzinger as being a group member
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  • "elevates the group to" → "elevated the group to"
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  • Introduce Kimberly Wyatt as being a fellow member
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  • "on the group's website and was available for" → "through the Pussycat Doll's website for" to avoid being overly wordy
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  • Change date to August 29, 2008 per the source
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  •   Done Italiszed.
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  • "to be released after" → "to be released as the follow-up to their single" with the pipe
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  • Identify contemporary hit as contemporary hit radio
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  • "as the third single" → "standing as the third single"
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  • Change to mention that it coincided with their schedule for the Doll Domination Tour and specify what you mean by the isles
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Composition

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  • Retitle to Composition and lyrics
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  • ""Whatcha Think About That" is an" → "Musically, "Whatcha Think About That" is an"
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  • "song with elements of" → "song, with elements of"
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  • Add a mention of the sample here, as it is key comp info and is fine to be repeated when you are not using the writers as previous
  • MrHyacinth This is the comp section so the sample is obviously most notable here, plus repeating things in articles is acceptable if only certain parts are wrote again, i.e do not reinstate the songwriter, though use Birkin's surname here instead. --K. Peake 21:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • [12] is not needed at the middle of the sentence when it is already at the end
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  • [11][13][12] should be put in numerical order
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  • "different activities such as" → "different activities, such as"
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  • "noted the group sounded" → "noted the group sound"
  •   Done this correction sounds better
  • "and empowered,"[16] and" → "and empowered",[16] and" per MOS:QUOTE
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  • "described as "resourceful."" → "described as "resourceful"."
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  • Italicise Idolator
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  • "three verses from Missy Elliott, who joins the group" → "three verses from Elliott, who joins the Pussycat Dolls"
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  • "boy-baiting session,"[20][11]" → "boy-baiting session",[11][20]"
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Critical reception

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  • Merge with the below section and retitle to Reception, as the following one is only a para long
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  • "called it a" → "called "Whatcha Think About That" a"
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  • Fix MOS:QUOTE issues throughout this section
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  • "considered the song an exception in an album that" → "considered the former an exception to how Doll Domination"
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  • "the group has recorded and described it" → "the Pussycat Dolls has recorded and described the track"
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  • "to Elliott adding" → "to Elliott, adding that"
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  • "who is sleepwalking adding" → "who is sleepwalking, adding"
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  • "Maura Johnston of Idolator criticized Scherzinger for "whining and preening" and" → "Johnston criticized Scherzinger for "whining and preening", and"
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Chart performance

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  • This should be merged as the third para of the above section
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  • "the track the track peaked at" → "the track peaked at"
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  • "In the United Kingdom," → "In the UK,"
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  • Identify the above chart
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  • "their previous single, "I Hate This Part"" → "their previous single "I Hate This Part""
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  • "of the top-forty." → "of the top-40." per MOS:NUM
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  • "her first top-ten entry" → "her first top-10 entry"
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  • "of 200,000 units." → "of 200,000 units in the UK."
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  • "as their ninth" → "as the Pussycat Dolls' ninth"
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  • "on the singles chart." → "on the UK Singles Chart."
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Music video

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  • Merge with the below section and retitle to Music video and promotion, per earlier
  • Img looks good, but wikilink music video on the text
  •   Done Also underlined that in this scene they are wearing the specific clothing/
  • "two days ending in" → "two days, ending on"
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  • "like Wyatt began to" → "like Wyatt, began to"
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  • Pipe AOL Music to AOL
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  • "the group released a" → "the Pussycat Dolls released a"
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  • Remove wikilink on Rap-Up and italicise, plus remove the punctuation from inside the sentence's quote
  • Remove wikilink on Rap-Up and italicise, plus introduce Melody Thornton as a group member
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  • "said, that the choreography will be" → "described the choreography as"
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  • Shouldn't you mention Fosse by full name?
  • "Throughout the video the group is wearing" → "Throughout the video, the Pussycat Dolls wear"
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  • "her verse and is intercut" → "her verse, which is intercut"
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  • None of the para after the colon is sourced apart from the quote in the following sentence; this needs sourcing due to not adhering to MOS:TVPLOT
  • "Then the video" → "Then, the video"
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  • ""dominatrix-style swings."" → ""dominatrix-style [...] swing[s]"."
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  • "lounge and prepare themselves" → "lounge, and prepare themselves"
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  • "to go on perform onstage." → "to go perform onstage."
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  • "with the Dolls next" → "with the Pussycat Dolls next"
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  • "outfits performing a" → "outfits, performing a"
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  • "surrounded by the group" → "as she is surrounded by them"
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  • "of Dolls silhouette while their dancing." → "of a Dolls' silhouette while they are dancing." unless it is the silhouette of multiple Dolls or the group themselves, then reword accordingly (use full group name for the latter)
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Live performances

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  • Make this the third para of the above sentence
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  • "on October 28, 2008 on" → "on October 28, 2008 for"
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  • Remove wikilink on Rap-Up and italicise
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  • "sounded a mess."" → "sounded a mess"." per MOS:QUOTE
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  • "during their headlining," → "during their headlining"
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Track listing and versions

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  • Shouldn't the Digital download releases have US before them like you've done with UK for the other ones?
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Credits and personnel

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  • Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel
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  • Add a specific order here; recording and mixing credits being grouped separately, songwriters being after other credits, etc. shows this is out of order

Charts

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Weekly charts

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  • Good

Year-end charts

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  • (Official Charts Company) → (OCC)
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Certifications

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  •   Done Caption added.

Release history

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  • See MOS:TABLECAPTION
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  • Worldwide → Various, as I doubt the song was released in every country on Earth
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  • CD Single → CD single
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References

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  • Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
  • Cite Rap-Up as work/website instead for refs 4, 6, 33, 35, 36 and 37
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  • WP:OVERLINK of Interscope Records on ref 7
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  • iTunes → iTunes Store on refs 8 and 40, only wikilinking on the former still
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  • TODAY.com → Today.com on ref 14, citing as work/website
  • Author-link Jon Pareles on ref 15
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  •   Done Removed.
  • Author-link Maura Johnston on ref 19 and cite Idolator as website instead
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  • Cite the original URL as well as archive for ref 27
  • WP:OVERLINK of The New York Times on ref 38
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  • Remove wikilink on Amazon.co.uk for ref 41
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Final comments and verdict

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  • Kyle Peake I think I resolved the above issues. Waiting for your feedback!
  • MrHyacinth I did some brief copy editing in areas where issues had inadvertently been edited in, but you still need to change to the Pussycat Dolls in the infobox. Also, make sure to sign posts off in the future, like this... --K. Peake 07:32, 25 March 2021 (UTC)Reply