Talk:When Emma Falls in Love/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Gained (talk · contribs) 12:48, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 01:40, 15 May 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I will complete a review within one week. -Riley1012 (talk) 01:40, 15 May 2024 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

1. Well-written

• ...and entered charts in Australia, Canada, New Zealand, and the United States. add "the" before charts
• Other musicians on the song includes Benjamin Lanz (synthesizer), James Krivchenia (drums, percussion)... change to "include"
• Christopher Rowe and Mike Meadows provides background vocals... change to "provide"
• The lyrics details the narrator's experience of watching a friend... change to "detail"

2. Verifiable
Copyvio check is fine- the highlighted similarities are the song title and direct quotes. The sources are reliable and correctly formatted.

• Spot check:

• Kate Solomon of i considered it "extremely mediocre" Solomon is actually calling Electric Touch "extremely mediocre," the complaint about When Emma Falls in Love is about it cloying (excessively sentimental).
• No issues: 1, 2, 6, 8, 12, 16, 18, 20, 21, 25, 27

3. Broad
The article is short but covers the subject fully.

4. Neutral
The article is neutral.

5. Stable
This article is stable day-to-day, no edit warring or content disputes.

6. Illustrated

• Are there any images that could be added? No worries if not.

@Gained: I'll be happy to promote this article after a few changes. -Riley1012 (talk) 17:45, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Hey @Riley1012! I have addressed all your points. As for the photos, I don't think there's a photo right now from the timeline when the album was released nor a photo where Swift is performing the song. Gained (talk) 04:19, 18 May 2024 (UTC)

That's fine! I will pass this. -Riley1012 (talk) 12:39, 18 May 2024 (UTC)

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