Talk:When I Grow Up (The Pussycat Dolls song)/GA1

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 02:39, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

2 deadlinks

•  Done Statυs (talk) 03:26, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

Reality series

• "the goal of the show was add a seventh member to the group." missing a word

•  Done Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

• Also this section has nothing to do with the song in any part, so its best to move it to the main page and remove it here.

• It's in the background section for a reason. This all happened before they began recording their second album. Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

  • I still see no reason to keep it here, it talks about the show not the song. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 23:07, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

    •  Not done Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 14:55, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

• Background information is to what put happened before the song's creation into context. Adding a new member, and then them leaving is directly relevant to one of the reasons they took so long to release a new album. Statυs (talk) 22:44, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

  • The section seems more suitable for the album, not the song. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 15:49, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

    • Can you remove this section to the main article so I can pass it? Best, Jona^{talk to me} 15:51, 26 July 2012 (UTC)

• I removed it 15 days ago... Statυs (talk) 02:27, 27 July 2012 (UTC)

Music and lyrics

• "Lead vocalist Nicole Scherzinger was cited as adopting" we already know she is the lead vocalist, so her last name is only needed here.
• Delink The Yardbirds

•  Done both Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

Remixes

• For unknown reasons, the remix was never released. source?

• Why exactly does this need a source? The remix just wasn't released. Nothing was said about it since. Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

• Please fix the {{cn}} tags in this section

• How would you suggest I source that statement? Could I just source the CD single/Digital releases that are present later in the article? Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

  • Yes, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 14:55, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

•  Done Statυs (talk) 22:44, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

Commercial performance

• at number seventy-six on the issue dated June 14, 2008 per WP:ORDINAL it would be 76, please apply elsewhere in this section.

•  Done what I could see. Statυs (talk) 03:10, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

Please fix these before I go further. BTW sorry for the long wait. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 02:54, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

It's perfectly alright. Thank you for picking up the review! Statυs (talk) 03:10, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

Short break, lets begin

Music video

• Delink Digital Spy
• "Kimberly's signature move:" source?

 Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

Live performances

• Delink MTV News
• Delink 2008 MTV Movie Awards
• Delink Los Angeles Times
• Delink Walmart
• ""Buttons",= and" what?

 Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

Formats and track listings

• Digital single source?
• Digital EP source?

 Done Statυs (talk) 00:07, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

References

• FN#4 "Archived from %7C the original" needs fixing

I don't see what is making it do that. Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• FN#8 publisherid?

The publisher ID is different on different versions of the album. By that I mean, it won't be the same on the US version as it would be on the European version. It's best to leave it out. Statυs (talk) 00:18, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• FN#12 Hachette Fillapaachi Medias is a redlink remove link

 Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• FN#15 publisher?

 Done Statυs (talk) 00:15, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• FN#16 "Up for Discussion Jump to Forums." I never heard of this author before

 Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• FN#17 "MTV Networks]. " needs fixing

 Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• FN#18 do not shout also its The New York Times. Check other publishers for same

 Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• FN#25 publisher?

Doesn't appear to be one. Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• FN#70 " "Video: Pussycat Dolls Perform on ‘So You Think You Can Dance&#8217"." needs fixing, also please compare to FN#58

 Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• FN#71 compare with FN#58

 Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• FN#74 do not shout

 Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

Please fix these issues. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 23:07, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for fixing, now passing. Best, Jona^{talk to me} 12:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)