Talk:White Rock Creek (Kansas)

Latest comment: 5 years ago by BlackcurrantTea in topic Neutral wording

Neutral wording

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The phrases 'buffalo hunters from Waterville, Kansas were slaughtered (by Indians)' and '(settlers) were all driven out by the Indians' seemed less than neutral. One might also say that the buffalo hunters were starving the Indians, and the settlers invaded their lands, so the Indians defended themselves. I looked at the source and chose what seems to me to be neutral wording between the two extremes. BlackcurrantTea (talk) 17:37, 25 April 2019 (UTC)Reply