Talk:Wilhelm Lemke

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Ian Rose in topic GA Review


GA Review

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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 05:39, 13 June 2015 (UTC)Reply


I'll aim to do this in the next few days. Cheers

Toolbox check -- no dab or EL issues.

Structure -- I just added a subheader/section for Eastern Front to balance the Western Front subsection.

Prose/content -- as always, let me know if any problems with my copyedit; other points:

  • "Lemke claimed his 57th victory on 7 September 1942, and his 59th victory on 11 September." -- this kind of begs the question, "what about his 58th victory?"
  • "On 27 December, he rammed a LaGG-3 in combat." -- wow, this really cries out for more explanation, for instance why did Lemke do it (accidental or deliberate?), where did the planes strike each other, did Lemke bail out or manage to retain control of his plane, what happened to the Soviet plane, etc.

Images -- licensing looks okay.

Referencing -- sources look reliable and fixed some minor formatting issues but:

Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 01:37, 17 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

Sorry it took a while to return -- tks for changes, passing as GA. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 04:56, 23 June 2015 (UTC)Reply