Talk:William Hely/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Ian Rose in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 07:21, 3 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 07:21, 3 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • Punctuate this better: Royal Australian Air Force (RAAF), which did not at that stage have its own officer training college.
  • How did a prospector borrow a RAAF Dragon Rapide?
    • Fair question! Actually he was on the plane in his capacity as survey director -- tweaked.
  • Which king was Hely an ADC for? And which queen?
  • All pics appropriately licensed.
  • No DABs, external links all work, although there are a lot of redirects.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:42, 12 June 2013 (UTC)Reply