Talk:William Shellabear

Latest comment: 13 years ago by RadioFan in topic Question about tone

Question about tone

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The article was tagged for its "tone". It would be helpful to know what changes in tone are desired. Pete unseth (talk) 17:11, 23 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

The tone needs neutral and less promotional sounding. Words like "pioneer" and "well known" should be avoided unless they are backed up by citations to reliable sources. Who considers this person to be a pioneer? If the answer is you or a single writer who has written about this person, it probably shouldn't be in the article. The purpose of the article is to inform, not to promote.--RadioFan (talk) 17:34, 23 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

Malaysia Conference of the Methodist Episcopal Church, 15th to 20th February, 1912

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http://images.library.yale.edu/divinitycontent/dayrep/Methodist%20Episcopal%20Church.%20Malaysia%20Conference%20%201912%20v20.pdf