Talk:Windows Push Notification Service
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review
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GA Review
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Windows Push Notification Service/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 16:41, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
edit- The image of the "Overview of the WNS architecture" needs an alt image description; please add one
Lead
edit- Remember: Anything that is mentioned in the lead needs to be mentioned in the article; the facts about "it was first supported on Windows 8 and subsequently on Windows Phone 8.1 upon its release." is cited wonderfully here, but it needs to be brought up in the article as well
- Same with Reference #2 please
Technical details
editDesign and compatibility
edit- No source for the "The service changes are expected to be released alongside an anniversary update to Windows 10." statement
Architecture
edit- Great work; nothing to add!
References
edit- The "Reflist" parameters should be changed to "Reflist|30em"; please do this to prevent extra space in this section
- Overlinking issues:
- Reference #2 – Unlink "Microsoft" please
- Reference #3 – Unlink "Microsoft" please
- Reference #8 – Unlink "Microsoft" please
End of GA Review:
editShort and sweet: a good and quick read! Great work! The article will be placed on hold for seven days to allow for any changes to be made. If you have a question for me regarding this review, feel free to @PING me and I'll respond and I'm sure I will respond swiftly. Thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 21:41, 13 June 2016 (UTC).
- Hi Carbrera - I've had a go at fixing the issues you've identified - any further feedback would be welcome! Mike1901 (talk) 21:58, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for your quick response; quick's the wrong word–more like immediate (a whopping 17 minutes!) I have passed the article now and appreciate your improvements. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 03:29, 14 June 2016 (UTC).