Talk:Wipe Your Eyes/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Arre 9 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Arre 9 (talk · contribs) 14:03, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
- Lead
- "...Mariam Doumbia, Marc Moreau" → "Mariam Doumbia and Marc Moreau"
- Background and production
- "middle 2011" → "mid 2011", more proper
- "...Mariam Doumbia, Marc Moreau" → "Mariam Doumbia and Marc Moreau"
- Composition and critical reception
- ...are a "fan favorites" songs" → "are "fan favorite" songs"
- Charts
- "...After the release of the album, as a results of the downloads the song debuted on the South Korea Gaon International Chart" → "Also following the album's release, strong downloads allowed the song to debut..."
- Overall
- Apart from these minor needed wording tweaks, this article is good. Once you fix them up, I'll pass this article. Arre 06:25, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
Done everything — Tomíca(T2ME) 21:01, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, passed. Arre 06:54, 2 May 2013 (UTC)