Talk:With You (Kaskade and Meghan Trainor song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 20:48, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Will take this on tomorrow --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:48, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Thank you, Kyle. I would also like to invite you to comment at Trainor's featured article nomination should you find some time later.--NØ 07:51, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Cover art needs alt text
• Writer(s) and Producer(s) should be bullet points instead of hlist
• WP:OVERLINK of Meghan Trainor in the infobox
• "and American singer-songwriter" → "and singer-songwriter"
• "Kaskade co-wrote the track with" → "Kaskade and Trainor co-wrote the track with"
• "Richard Beynon and Thomas Shaw, and" → "Richard Beynon, and Thomas Shaw, while Kaskade"
• "Released on June 14, 2019," → "Released as a single on June 14, 2019," with the appropriate target
• "it is an electropop song and lyrically talks about" → "the song is an electropop track. The lyrics talk about"
• "The song received positive reviews from critics." there are not enough reviews to back up this claim
• "Commercially, it reached" → "Commercially, "With You" reached"
• "additionally managing to reach" → "additionally managing to enter"
• ""With You" received an animated video as well as an official" → "An animated video was released for it, as well as a" with the target
• "a Remix EP featuring" → "a Remix EP, featuring"
• "Loris Cimino and Dexter," → "Loris Cimino, and Dexter,"

Background and promotion

• Retitle to Background and release
• Remove wikilink on Kaskade
• "Gorgon City and Roméo" → "Gorgon City, and Roméo"
• "He co-wrote "With You"" → "Him and Trainor co-wrote "With You""
• "Richard Beynon and Thomas Shaw, and" → "Richard Beynon, and Thomas Shaw, while Kaskade"
• "Kaskade enlisted Meghan Trainor as" → "Kaskade enlisted Trainor as"
• "the track, and said that" → "the track, saying that"
• "yes for me. I knew we could" → "yes for me". He continued, stating that he knew they "could"
• "While the former stated that" → "Trainor stated that"
• [3][4] should both be solely at the end of the sentence
• Wikilink social media to itself
• "on June 10, 2019.[5] A snippet" → "on June 10, 2019, while a snippet"
• [5][6] should both be solely at the end of the sentence in new order
• "and streaming on June 14" → "and streaming as a single on June 14 of that year"
• "to contemporary hit radio in Italy" → "to contemporary hit radio as a single in Italy"
• "June 28, and the US" → "June 28, and the United States"
• "and Epic Records respectively" → "and Epic Records, respectively"
• "in the latter country on August 5, 2019" → "as a single in the US on August 5, 2019"
• "Columbia Records released a Remix EP" → "Columbia released a Remix EP"
• "featuring remixes of it" → "including remixes of it"
• "Loris Cimino and Dexter" → "Loris Cimino, and Dexter"

Composition and reception

• Wikilink tempo to itself
• "sending her mixed signals" → "delivering mixed signals to her"
• "she could be using her time better" → "she could be making better usage of her time"
• "song finds her" → "song finds Trainor
• Target chorus to Refrain
• Dancing Astronaut should not be italicised
• Target digestibility to Digestion
• "it, and that" → "it and that"
• Target synth to Synthesizer
• Remove Radio.com since that is literally the only review cited here; the other two are just explaining the composition
• "reached number 15 on the" → "reached number 15 on the Billboard"
• "on the Adult Top 40 chart," → "on the Adult Top 40 chart."
• "and numbers 12 and 31" → "It further peaked at number 12 and 31"
• "charts respectively" → "charts, respectively"
• "It earned a number 46 placement on the Year-end" → "The song ranked at number 46 on the year-end US"
• "chart, and additionally charted" → "chart for 2019, while additionally charted"

Promotion

• Retitle to Music videos and promotion, since the Live performance subsection is one sentence which can go in the last para of the merged sub-sections

Music videos

• "An accompanying animated video for "With You" was" → "An accompanying animated video was" with the target
• "explore a psychedelic outer space. It commences" → "explore a psychedelic outer space and the video commences"
• Sure there isn't any appropriate target for psychedelic?
• "controlling a spaceship and crashing" → "controlling a spaceship that she crashes"
• "rocky terrain which is populated" → "rocky terrain, which is populated"
• "mystical superpowers, and Trainor can cast" → "mystical superpowers and Trainor is able to cast"
• "eyes, which grow trees" → "eyes that grow trees"
• Remove target on Billboard
• "described it as" → "described the music video as"
• Entertainment Tonight Canada should be italicised
• Wikilink technicolor to itself
• "the official music video was released" → "the music video for "With You" was released"
• "Idolator's Mike Wass described the visuals" → "Wass described the visuals of it"
• "as she was" → "stating that she was"
• Add the live performance sentence straight after the above one in the same para

Live performance

• "Kaskade and Trainor performed "With You" for the first time, on Today, on September 13, 2019." → "On September 13, 2019, Kaskade and Trainor performed "With You" on Today for further promotion."

Track listing

• Good

Personnel

• Retitle to Credits and personnel
• Wikilink Meghan Trainor to herself

Charts

Weekly charts

• See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Year-end charts

• See above

Release history

• See MOS:TABLECAPTION
• Format → Format(s)
• The refs should all be centered
• Remixes → Remix EP

References

• Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
• Copyvio score looks alright at 32.4%
• Cite Your EDM as publisher instead for ref 1
• Cite Dancing Astronaut as publisher instead for refs 5 and 14, but keep no wikilink on 14
• Cite Radio Date as the publisher for ref 8
• Cite Apple Music of numerous countries for ref 11 to verify that the release was indeed various
• Wikilink Record Report to itself on ref 21
• Cite Entertainment Tonight Canada as work/website instead for refs 24 and 26, but keep no wikilink on 26

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold, nice article that needs some improvements. --Kyle Peake (talk) 08:27, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

• I have gone ahead and done everything. I added a couple more reviews and kept the line about the song receiving "positive reviews", and the stuff from Radio.com.--NØ 09:41, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

MaranoFan You will need to add another review to verify that it was positive since three is not enough and mention what was praised in the lead, plus I have split the Composition and reception section for you. Also, add a third citation under the various release... maybe Venezuela or China if they have Apple Music; if not that then some popular place like Australia. --Kyle Peake (talk) 12:13, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

• Done.--NØ 12:26, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

Thanks, ✓ Pass! --Kyle Peake (talk) 13:43, 24 June 2020 (UTC)