Talk:Women in the United Arab Emirates

Latest comment: 2 months ago by Imusingausername in topic Wiki Education assignment: WRI 101

Obvious bias

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This article is a bit of a joke. There is nothing factually wrong with the information, but there is no discussion of the negative aspects of being a woman in the UAE. This is still a place where men often will not shake hands with a woman, where women have separate queues in public offices and separate rooms in restaurants, where women must follow a stricter dress code than men, etc. etc. etc. I don't see any of this in the article.

Ideally, these issues should be addressed by someone who lives in the UAE and has greater depth of knowledge than I do. In particular, I think foreigners living in the UAE would offer a good perspective. Nojamus (talk) 17:00, 26 September 2012 (UTC)Reply

  • This is you speaking from ignorance. Many Emirati women wouldn't shake a man's hand, due to cultural norms, not the other way around. Queues are usually mixed, though some government offices do have ones for each gender; you still get the same service though. Not sure what you mean by 'women must follow...' this is not in the penal code of the UAE and women aren't punished by the law should they not dress the traditional sheila and abaya. Most do out of following religious law and culture, voluntarily, as they are not punished by the law. They do it willingly, but it seems this somehow pisses you off. It's strange, you should open your eyes more to the world around you, and realize people have different perspectives and beliefs than you. That doesn't make them worth any less than you. 209.2.50.81 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 19:37, 29 October 2012 (UTC)Reply
Please do not make personal remarks. They don't help improve the article at all. Thanks. GeorgeLouis (talk) 17:53, 26 September 2014 (UTC)Reply

- I find this article not fair and balanced. I've visited both Abu Dhabi and Dubai numerous times and have also seen their factories first hand. I've seen women fairly represented in retail, travel, banking, domestic and government services. What is not expressed in this article is the treatment of and violations towards women in the UAE. The UAE has a well documented history of human rights violations especially towards woman. Human trafficking for the purpose of domestic work and prostitution in both Abu Dhabi and Dubai are well known (and referenced here in Wikipedia). Domestic workers are often raped, abused, deprived of food and underpaid (if paid at all). And many have been striped of their papers making it impossible to leave the country.

Human Rights on Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Human_rights_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates#Human_trafficking_and_prostitution http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_Arab_Emirates#Human_rights Human Rights Watch: http://www.hrw.org/world-report-2012/world-report-2012-united-arab-emirates

Labour laws in the UAE support employers first. With so much international attention in the UAE it is forcing governments to change their laws, practices and provide protection. But violations still occur. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Suewahsing (talkcontribs) 09:41, 30 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

Driving cars?

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"Women are free to join Government departments including the Police. When Dubai police purchased some luxury vehicles, they permitted them to drive the police cars and also take pictures with these newly acquired additions.[16]"

So are women who are not in the police force not allowed to drive? Also, the article linked to does not say that women were allowed to drive the police cars. -- SEWilco (talk) 16:27, 25 September 2014 (UTC)Reply

Recently deleted material

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Lenore recently deleted this and this material, stating, "POV and original research." and "Deleting POV and not-noticeable quotes."

From what I see, Lenore misunderstands the WP:Neutral (POV) policy, as people commonly do. Being neutral on Wikipedia does not mean what being neutral means in common discourse; it means following what the sources state and giving them the appropriate weight. From what I see, Lenore also misunderstands the WP:Original research (OR) policy. Like that policy states, "The phrase 'original research' (OR) is used on Wikipedia to refer to material—such as facts, allegations, and ideas—for which no reliable, published sources exist." After "exists," there is a note that states, "By 'exists', the community means that the reliable source must have been published and still exist—somewhere in the world, in any language, whether or not it is reachable online—even if no source is currently named in the article. Articles that currently name zero references of any type may be fully compliant with this policy—so long as there is a reasonable expectation that every bit of material is supported by a published, reliable source." I see that Lenore has also misapplied the POV and WP:OR policies elsewhere. At both articles, these deletions indicate a WP:IDON'TLIKEIT rationale. Flyer22 (talk) 23:41, 29 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Maybe this edit is questionable so I don't have any intention to dispute over, but the paragraph "rape victim" says essentially that even if women were found guilty of false allegations, the are rape victims only because they say it. This is clearly POV. Lenore (talk) 21:55, 30 March 2015 (UTC)Reply
Lenore, we can reword things. If it is contested that the women are rape victims, we can present both sides with WP:Due weight, per WP:Verifiability, if there are WP:Reliable sources relaying that one or more of the women are not rape victims. I noted/pointed to the WP:POV policy above so that you can better understand it. You should thoroughly read it. RolandR has reverted you, citing the text as a non-POV problem. You need to explain how there is a POV problem as far as Wikipedia rules go; for example, what I just mentioned about providing WP:Reliable sources that state otherwise about the rape victim aspect. Flyer22 (talk) 23:59, 30 March 2015 (UTC)Reply
It would be better if personalities were kept out of this, which can be done simply by not using editors' names or referring them in any way but simply sticking to suggestions for improving the article. BeenAroundAWhile (talk) 05:16, 31 March 2015 (UTC)Reply
The above editor is actually more polite than many I have seen on Wikipedia, and I was too quick to comment on some of the répartée here. BeenAroundAWhile (talk) 06:07, 31 March 2015 (UTC)Reply
BeenAroundAWhile, while WP:Talk is clear that the focus of the talk page should be on the topic of improving the article rather than on specific editors, it is also clear that discussing other editors' edits on the talk page comes with the territory. Yes, that includes mentioning the editors by name. That is what WP:Dispute resolution involves, after all. Where WP:Talk states, "Comment on content, not on the contributor: Keep the discussions focused upon the topic of the talk page, rather than on the personalities of the editors contributing to the talk page.", it links to the WP:Personal attacks policy with the "on the contributor" wording. I did not violate the WP:Personal attacks policy above by noting Lenore's problematic editing and informing Lenore of what he is doing wrong. In this case, improving the article concerns Lenore editing appropriately. We should not be vague about what editor is acting inappropriately. And so I was not. And the WP:Diffs, which are what I often use to argue on talk pages, would show which editor I am referring to anyway. At WP:Talk, I will likely propose new wording for the "Comment on content, not on the contributor" wording, since it is misused. Same goes for the "Focus on content" wording at the WP:Dispute resolution page. Flyer22 (talk) 05:57, 31 March 2015 (UTC)Reply
I was focused on the content/inappropriate removal of the content by an editor. Flyer22 (talk) 06:10, 31 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Well, if you want to insert that paragraph you should underline that they are rape victims even if convicted is an opinion of some associations. I suppose you will not allow such contestations about guilty for CHarles Manson or anyone who was convicted in USA. So what's the point? Lenore (talk) 10:43, 31 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Anyway, I reintroduced the section, although I am very disagreeing with that. Regards. Lenore (talk) 10:46, 31 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Lenore, per above, you should not be making edits like these that I just reverted. Stick to what the sources state or do not add anything at all. And do not remove material simply because you do not like it. Do you want me to take this matter to some form of WP:Dispute resolution? Or start a WP:RfC on it? Or, hey, even add two or three sources to support the content, no matter the WP:Citation overkill? Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 12:07, 7 November 2015 (UTC)Reply

Don't you think the source is a bit POV? And then, not ALL you can find on the internet is a reliable source. What could you say for a source that states "women convicted because they were raped"? If you want to include this source, please do it in a way that is clear that those are personal opinions and NOT facts. And then, I didn't remove anything. Thank you. --Lenore (talk) 13:33, 7 November 2015 (UTC)Reply
This is WP:Synthesis, just like this bit by you that I reverted. I'm not going to argue about it or your interpretation of a POV problem. If you do not revert yourself or do not otherwise stick to exactly what the source states, I will be advancing this matter via a form of WP:Dispute resolution. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 13:41, 7 November 2015 (UTC)Reply
And even wording it as "Women in UAE can be subject to flogging.", which is what I thought about changing it to, is better than your "some sources" wording. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 13:46, 7 November 2015 (UTC)Reply
Internet is full of "sources" that state everything and the opposite of everything. THIS source is POV. How could I call a source that says that a woman prosecuted by authorities is a victim only because she's a woman? And should I cite it literally? Absurd. Lenore (talk) 14:00, 7 November 2015 (UTC)Reply
Read WP:Reliable sources and WP:Neutral thoroughly. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 14:02, 7 November 2015 (UTC)Reply

Purpose of Edit summaries

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The purpose of the Edit summary is to tell something about the edit, not to carry on back-and-forth conversations with other editors. BeenAroundAWhile (talk) 05:24, 31 March 2015 (UTC)Reply


Sentence Deleted

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I deleted the sentence "The ratio of literate females within the 15- to 24- year age group rose from 100.5% in 1990 to 110% in 2004, reaching 90% literacy overall in 2007." because it doesn't make sense as currently written and I don't have access to the underlying reference to correct it. Obviously literacy rates cannot be more than 100%. If it's a ratio to some other group then we need to know what that other group is for this to make sense. It would be great if someone could fix this sentence and return it to the article. Sinusoidal (talk) 14:57, 20 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

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Section blanking left in place for over two years.

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In late 2017, an IP removed the entire sections on flogging, stoning, forced disappearance, torture, sexual assault, and judicial rape report retaliation from this article.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Women_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates&diff=prev&oldid=814476821&diffmode=source

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Women_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates&diff=prev&oldid=814476707&diffmode=source

The removed material appears to have been well-cited.

The user that removed it also did so repeatedly after multiple restorations, and was thus clearly engaged in edit warring.

Intralexical (talk) 14:53, 11 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Lead falsely portrays the UAE as a gender-equal society

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The editor 'Gorebath' is edit-warring changes to the lead that falsely portray the UAE as a gender-equal society where women have historically and to the present been deeply involved in politics, business and society. There is substantial discrimination against women in the UAE, both in society and in the country's laws. It is absurd to spent most of the lead emphasizing how equal women are in the UAE with one sentence at the end of the lead saying "there are some challenges that remain". Snooganssnoogans (talk) 01:20, 9 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

I didn't "falsely" portray UAE as a gender-equal society. I added reliable sources with proper citations regarding the roles of women in the region prior to the formation of UAE as a law state. I also never said that there is no substantial discrimination again women, which is clearly cited in the article and the lead. Also, greater progress is statement from HRW. Again, this all seems like WP:IJUSTDONTLIKEIT. Gorebath (talk) 01:47, 9 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
That doesn’t appear to be a reliable source in this context. Please actually engage with the constructive criticism of your work rather than dismissing it off hand and edit warring. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 14:03, 14 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
Care to elaborate why The National does not appear to be a reliable source in this context? It is a cited secondary source with the author Rym ghazal. Secondary sources are not necessarily independent sources. Even if it was a primary source, per WP:PSTS, it would still merit inclusion. Unless you get concensus that the national is a depreciated or an unreliable source, I don't see a reason to omit such sources. Gorebath (talk) 18:54, 14 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
"Even if it was a primary source, per WP:PSTS, it would still merit inclusion” thats not how that one works and also not what WP:PSTS is saying... See WP:DUEWEIGHT. If you want to take this source in this context WP:RSN you can do so. Also you are aware that they are owned by Mansour bin Zayed Al Nahyan right? You don’t think thats an issue? Horse Eye's Back (talk) 19:18, 14 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
I don't see an undue weight, weight is balanced per women's roles (which this article is about) as well as the state's repressive laws per human rights organizations (which Women's rights in the United Arab Emirates article talks about). Where's the undue weight? I am not the one disputing the source's reliability enough to nuke whole articles who cite these sources and consider it a depreciated source to take it to WP:RSN. Government owned news sources are not banned in wikipedia, just FYI. Reliable sources are not required to be neutral, unbiased, or objective. Someone may claim that HRW is biased for example in this context. Even non-neutral sources are sometimes the best possible sources for supporting information about the different viewpoints held on a subject. You may add attribution if you see it necessary Gorebath (talk) 19:55, 14 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
Thats not what WP:DUEWEIGHT is, read the link... Also note that The National is not owned by the Government, it is owned by the deputy prime minister in a private capacity. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 00:06, 15 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
You still have not explained where the undue weight is. Gorebath (talk) 07:51, 15 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
Agreed. The lead is a joke. Especially footnotes 8 and 9, two articles that support the opposite of what's said in the main text. גיאחה (talk) 19:33, 13 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: WRI 101

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 August 2024 and 23 October 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): WRI101, Jojo.julia209, Imusingausername, Sportfantic (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Tdamsep, R3dlikeb1ue, LMaz06, Saif alsuwaidi.

— Assignment last updated by Imusingausername (talk) 12:28, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Domestic Workers

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Added information on the background of domestic workers. Adjusted the order of a sentence. WRI101 (talk) 14:56, 19 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

History

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Contributed to the history section in this article, by adding significant information to give the reader a wider idea about the history of this topic, women in the UAE. I also used transition words at the beginning of the existing sentences to make it smoother. The cited information that I added is nor biased or promotional since I used factual information from an organization. Thus, this topic has a rich history that deserves to be shown. 2A00:1851:19:F507:F0F2:422C:57AE:6616 (talk) 19:35, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

The source in question is a 7-page document of uncertain authorship[1]. The document looks like it was authored by the UAE government, which makes it a bad source for assertions about how much the UAE promotes women's rights. Thenightaway (talk) 21:59, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
It's not authored by the UAE government, its a document published by The Office of the High Commissioner for Human Rights, as shown in the link. Thus, it makes it a resourceful cite to use. It also shouldn't be viewed as a pure promotional document for women's rights in the UAE, because it includes facts about the history of this topic which is what is most important. Therefore, I am using the facts in this document, and disregarding the promotional information which is bound to be included anywhere. However, the key here is to include and focus on the facts. 83.110.108.209 (talk) 08:58, 23 September 2024 (UTC)Reply