Talk:Word of God Speak/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 03:18, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

Comments from AJona1992

• Infobox: "Release" needs a {{start date}} template
  • Done
• Infobox: "Length" needs a {{duration}} template
  • Done
• Infobox: "Recorded" remove all recording sessions and just give the date and unlink United States
  • Done
• "massive success" - is orish
  • Changed to 'considerable' - does that work?
• Released as the second single from MercyMe's 2002 album Spoken For, "Word of God Speak" attained massive success on Christian radio, spending twenty-three weeks atop the Christian Songs chart, a record for that chart; it spent a total of seventy-six weeks on that chart - Ummm where's the period?
  • I see a period at the end.
• There are too many sentences with the word "the song" - needs a variety
  • Done, I think
• If FN#1 covers the first para then only added at the end of the first para instead of having it at every period as well as for FN#2
  • Done
• Why do readers need to know about "Spoken For"? This article is about "Word of God Speak"
  • Typo on my part - corrected
• Wikilink key, beats per minute, vocal range
  • Done
• "and has a tempo" - whats the tempo? Is it a downtempo, mid-tempo, moderate tempo, or an up-tempo?
  • Not sure how to add that without inserting OR - the only thing given in the source is a tempo, along with a bizarre and probably non-applicable description of it
• "The music to "Word of God Speak" is simple," - is orish and violates WP:NPOV
  • Changed to 'stripped down', per the source
• "which reflect on the idea that it is impossible to speak of an infinite God with a limited vocabulary." - is in the lead, so this sentence should not be the same (re-write the lyrical content in another way)
  • Adjusted
• Spoken For (is wikilinked twice)
  • Fixed
• I am guessing that Russ Breimeier was the author of "prayer and worship are not flowery orations", please give credits to Breimeier in the previous section
  • Done
• "had tremendous success as a single" - another orish and violation of WP:NPOV sentence
  • Removed
• Too many sentences has "on the chart" - needs a variety
  • Done
• For "Charts" only wikilink publications and charts once
  • Done
• File:Mercyme icanonlyimagine.jpg needs a better rational to comply with WP:NFCC. See File:Amorprohibidosingle.jpg as an example
  • Fixed
• Please fix these concerns before I do a spotcheck and a reference check. Happy holidays, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 03:18, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

Reference checking

• FN#1, FN#3 Crosswalk.com does not need to be in italics
  • Done
• FN#2 use "pp" for "pages" (similar to FN#4)
  • Done
• FN#5 About.com does not need to be in italics
  • Done
• FN#7 Mikecurb.com does not need to be in italics
  • Done
• FN#13, FN#14, FN#15 Allmusic does not need to be in italics
  • Done
• What makes this? a reliable source?
  • For one, I used it on my GA "I Can Only Imagine" - the 'Track listing' section is copied over from that page, as "Word of God Speak" is "Imagine"'s A-side. I don't see why it doesn't work for this.
• FN#17, FN#18 the work is iTunes Store not iTunes
  • Done
• Sorry for the late review. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 15:26, 2 January 2012 (UTC)