Talk:Worthington Brewery/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 04:49, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose):
   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references):
   b (citations to reliable sources):
   c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects):
   b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• No issues

Lead

• The Worthington Brewery (Worthington & Co.) was founded by William Worthington in the English Midlands town of Burton upon Trent in 1761. → Try and expand history with information in article  Done

It's a small article, I don't want to overwhelm the intro, but I've added some more history to the first paragraph.Farrtj (talk) 19:46, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Overview

• Put this section below the "History" section  Done

History

• Fair use rationale needed for portrait of Worthington  Done
• Fix disambiguation issue with "cooper" according to this  Done

Worthington White Shield

• William Worthington's White Shield (5.6% ABV) is available bottle conditioned and in casks.[18] → "William Worthington's White Shield" should not be bolded  Done

References

• Make sure to proofread through this section, and follow these guidelines to help you:

• Make sure to include the publisher of each reference
• If the work or publisher wiki-links to an article, wiki-link it only the first time you use the source
• The only things that should be italicized in the "work=" parameter should be written publications, like magazines or newspapers
• Also use WP:REF as a guide to help you as well

Referencing is definitely my weak point. Could I ask you to be a little more specific about the issues regarding referencing? Farrtj (talk) 19:54, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Referencing sorted out.Farrtj (talk) 02:46, 24 June 2012 (UTC)  Done

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. There are some prose issues among other things that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 18:05, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

All issues have now been addressed, so I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 04:13, 24 June 2012 (UTC)