Suggestions

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  • Pay attention to the gender when using his and her, as using the wrong one will lead the English reader to think you are talking about someone else. For example "her nephew" sounds like you are talking about Wu Mi's sister's nephew.
  • Names of universities and schools should start their words with capital letters.
  • Don't use angle brackets like < >, use italics for book titles: eg Poetry Anthology of Wu Mi done with ''Poetry Anthology of Wu Mi''. In Enlish you can also use double quotes: "Poetry Anthology of Wu Mi".
  • Put the list of writings just before the references and after anecdotes.