Talk:X: A Fabulous Child's Story/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Barkeep49 (talk · contribs) 01:17, 7 March 2019 (UTC)

Review

• The sources for the information in the first few sentences of Publication are unclear
• In Reception I think Hurley is far more positive than you're characterizing them to be. The criticism is there but probably should reflect the balance of the source on the whole more.
• In Legacy I think you need to lead with "some scholars of children's literature consider X: A Fabulous Child's Story to be part of the lineage of modern children's books with transgender themes, even though the story does not explicitly deal with trans gender identity." since that summarizes the paragraph. You can then present your three quotes/sources to contextualize it.

Discussion

Plan to start this in the next day or two. Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 01:17, 7 March 2019 (UTC)

• @Bobamnertiopsis: This article is in excellent shape. See a few comments above. Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 18:07, 11 March 2019 (UTC)
  • @Barkeep49: Good comments all! I've addressed each and look forward to additional feedback, if you have any. Thanks for the review! I hugely appreciate your work. Best —Collin^{t c} 02:34, 13 March 2019 (UTC)