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GA Review

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Reviewer: Link20XX (talk · contribs) 20:05, 2 February 2021 (UTC)

@Tintor2: I have completed my initial review. Great work overall, just a few small changes are needed. I decided to WP:BEBOLD and make some small corrections.

Lead:

• The date formats is dmy, yet the air dates for the anime in the infobox are mdy. This should be corrected.
  • Done.
• Why do you use Geneon as the distributor for the anime TV series in the lead? They lost the rights to the series and Funimation has it now in North America, so shouldn't they be credited instead?
  • Simplified

Plot:

• "Across the manga, Kamui and his allies, the Dragons of Earth, multiple times but cannot protect most barriers", do what multiple times? Maybe something like "try" or "attempt" is needed after the first comma.
• Done

Media:

• In feature film, "powerful imagery and visually engaging action sequences." What is the point of this line? This sounds like reception. It should be removed or at least corrected/changed in some way.
  • Removed
• In television series, "Pioneer Entertainment claimed distributed the series in North America in March 2002." I don't believe the word "claimed" is needed.
  • Done
• In the same section, the source for MVM's license and Siren's license are switched.
  • Did you do a bold edit? Because I think it's correct.

That is all. Ping me when the changes have been addressed and I will pass it. Side note but if you haven't listed Your Lie in April at Wikipedia:Good articles/Language and literature yet, you should. Link20XX (talk) 01:44, 3 February 2021 (UTC)

@Link20XX: Thanks for the review.Tintor2 (talk) 11:46, 3 February 2021 (UTC)

@Tintor2: The changes you made are enough. The result of this review is Pass. Congratulations! Link20XX (talk) 15:07, 3 February 2021 (UTC)