Talk:Y Hubo Alguien/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:45, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "which combines R&B," with what?
• "had his partner" missing word?
• "the Billboard Latin" italic for Billboard.
• "chart where it spent eight weeks at this poisition", chart, spending eight weeks there.
• You link "produced" in the main article but not in the lead, do it both.
• "1997).[4][1] " order.
• "Alfanno was commissioned by Ralph Mercado, the executive producer of RMM, to write a song" song/song repetitive.
• "However the song was rejected because its lyrics were not written by a woman.[7]" whaaat?
• "after a few drinks," not encyclopedic.
• "to Marc Anthony's greatest..." no need here (and subsequently) to start using his first name again.
• "On the review of the album " reiterate the album, the previous album you mentioned was the other artist who covered it.
• "the 1998 Tropical Airplay year" overlinked.
• Ref 27 has spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.

That's all I have on a quick run. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:20, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, TRM. When I re-read the article where it mentions why the song was rejected, it didn't elaborate enough. So I did a quick scour on the Internet and found it was because the song was supposed to sung by a woman, but the song was rejected because he wasn't a woman himself so I amended the article to mention. Other than, how does it look it now? I took care everything else you mentioned. Erick (talk) 01:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)