Talk:Yanou Collart

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• ... that Yanou Collart has been called a courtesan for food and friendship?

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• ALT1: ... that Yanou Collart's career was motivated by a desire to "never be dependent on a man"? Source: 1
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Moved to mainspace by Wasianpower (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

🌸⁠wasianpower⁠🌸 (talk • contribs) 04:19, 4 December 2024 (UTC).

• Article is new enough, long enough, and without any serious issues. Image in article is fair use, but she's still alive—pretty sure that's not allowed. The first hook is questionable as to appropriateness for a BLP. The second is a tad vague. I would appreciate an ALT2. ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:25, 6 December 2024 (UTC)

Image has been removed. How about ALT2: ... that Yanou Collart helped Rock Hudson get medical treatment when Nancy Reagan would not? 1. For a less vague ALT1, ALT1a: ... that Yanou Collart's career as one the world's most prominent publicists was originally motivated by a desire to "never be dependent on a man"? 🌸⁠wasianpower⁠🌸 (talk • contribs) 21:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)

• ALT1a is GTG. ALT2 is sourced to before Buzzfeed News became worse than useless, so that's approved and my preference as a hook. Excellent work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 22:31, 6 December 2024 (UTC)

Works cited question

@Wasianpower, there are two sources which aren’t cited in the text but are in the works cited section that might be worth going to a further reading section. the article by Ruth Reichl and the magazine entry by William Stadiem are the two. Thanks, Cowboygilbert - (talk) ♥ 08:13, 4 December 2024 (UTC)

taken care of! found a use for one source and moved the other, thanks for noticing. 🌸⁠wasianpower⁠🌸 (talk • contribs) 14:26, 4 December 2024 (UTC)

@Wasianpower, Your welcome. You can actually use User:Trappist the monk/HarvErrors to spot these! They’ll show a work in a work cited/bibliography that isn’t pointed to a citation so you don’t have random sources lying around. Cowboygilbert - (talk) ♥ 16:43, 5 December 2024 (UTC)

@Cowboygilbert ooooo thank you very much!! I will definitely bookmark that and make use of it in the future. This article had been sitting in draftspace for months because I lost motivation to finish it, so I kind of lost track of which sources I had and hadn't used. 🌸⁠wasianpower⁠🌸 (talk • contribs) 17:35, 5 December 2024 (UTC)

@Wasianpower, All good. If you want to look at more userscripts that are helpful you can look at my common.js subpage at User:Cowboygilbert/common.js Cowboygilbert - (talk) ♥ 19:46, 5 December 2024 (UTC)