Talk:Yash Chopra (book)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:10, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:10, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Non-free use rationale looks good.
• I couldn't find any issues with the infobox.
• The lead section also looks good.

Summary

• No issues here.

Development and writing

• "In it he talks" → "In it, he talks"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:41, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

• "after watching Darr, she" → "after watching Darr that she"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:41, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

• "wrote Chopra" → "wrote to Chopra"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:41, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

• "he tired of speaking" → "he was tired of speaking"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:41, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Release

• "who chose to do research on a" → "who chose to research a"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:42, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Critical reception

• This section looks good.

Publication history

• No issues here.

References

• Sources are archived.

Infobox and lead

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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