Talk:Yatton railway station/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Jezhotwells in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk · contribs) 19:01, 1 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: none found.

Linkrot: two found and tagged.[1] Jezhotwells (talk) 19:18, 1 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

Checking against GA criteria

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    "The station was originally built, as the name suggests, to serve passengers for Clevedon, who would travel on by road. " I don't see how the name Yatton suggests this. Perhaps add "as originally named".  Done
    Fixed. -mattbuck (Talk) 21:03, 1 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
    There are a number of stray single sentences, which should be consolidated into paragraphs.
    Better? -mattbuck (Talk) 21:12, 1 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
    I can still see several stray sentences. Jezhotwells (talk) 21:39, 1 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
    There is not a single lone sentence left that I can see. -mattbuck (Talk) 22:50, 1 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
    Generally prose is good and apart from the points above, compliant with key elements of the MoS.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    Two dead links found as noted above.
    I have fixed the SCRP one, but have not done the other - I think this is a temporary problem with APCOA's website, as the link is still listed when you search for Yatton, but redirects to their homepage. A brief check of other car parks also revealed the same behaviour. -mattbuck (Talk) 21:03, 1 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
    Fair enough. Jezhotwells (talk) 21:39, 1 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
    Otherwise references well formatted, appear to be RS, no evidence of OR, spotchecks support statements.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Good coverage, but not sure if the Incidents section is necessary. These are minor incidents, not of any encyclopaedic nature.  Done
    Not entirely happy about removing it, but I accept they're fairly minor. -mattbuck (Talk) 21:03, 1 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
    Fair and unbiased.
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    Stable
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Images from Commons, correctly tagged and licensed and captioned.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 19:32, 1 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
    OK, thanks for the fixes, I am happy to list this as a good article. Jezhotwells (talk) 03:24, 5 July 2012 (UTC)Reply