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It's a bit better now
editSo the page is coming along much better. The few things I will comment on though are as follows:
- The awards section needs a little bit of work in terms of promotional material. An idea could be to move the awards section into another section as to make it seem less like an advertisement.
- There's a significant amount of primary sources. Could you try finding more secondary ones (ones not associated with the company or its VC)?
Otherwise, great job! — Your local Sink Cat (The Sink). 00:30, 9 November 2024 (UTC)