Talk:You (Regard, Troye Sivan and Tate McRae song)/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:56, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
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I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 07:56, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Infobox looks good!
"It was written by the latters" → "It was written by the performers"Mention the teaser and it being their first collaboration before the release sentence"It received critical acclaim from" → "The song received critical acclaim from"Only mention countries it reached "the top 50" in the first sentence since below that is not notable"in the US and" → "in the United States and" per MOS:US, as this is the first mention of the country"The official music video was" → "The accompanying music video was"Remove the word official from YouTube channel because that is obvious for the lead"and the United States." → "and the US."
Background and composition
edit"with Regard uploading a" → "with Regard also uploading a"Regard's elaboration statements seems like it should be the "Collaborating with..." one, as that is the only quote of this in the source[11] should solely be invoked at the end of the sentence"Sivan and Mc Rare sing about" → "Sivan and McRae sing about""During the lyrics, they sing," → "On the chorus, they sing,"
Reception
editOnly write music critics, omitting the writers part"to him, create an" → "to him, creates an"Remove or replace PopClub per WP:SELFPUB"vocals from them" → "vocals from the singers""likening the "sultry and" → "appreciating the "sultry and""an "infatuation and summer" anthem, that" → "an "infatuation" and summer anthem that""opined that "['You'] is a great" → "opined that "['You'] is [a] great""should be […] with each artist" → "should be [with] each artist"Only identify the United States chart as Billboard Hot 100"It also peaked atop" → "The song also peaked atop""more than 500,000 units." → "more than 500,000 certified units in the US." per MOS:US"the Netherlands,[28] Singapore,[29] as well as" → "the Netherlands[28] and Singapore,[29] as well as"
Promotion
editWikilink lyric video to itself per MOS:LINK2SECTPipe acoustic to Acoustic musicI don't think "on 14 June" is needed when you mentioned the date a sentence before the later part"and controlling the video." → "and taking control.""who's face is covered" → "whose face is covered""Tate was in Los Angeles," → "Tate was in LA," per the source wording"a really cool idea"." → "a really cool idea."" per MOS:QUOTEThe black setting and LED wall parts are unsourced"of MTV's Video Music Awards" → "of the MTV Video Music Awards"
Track listing
edit- Good
Credits and personnel
edit- Are you sure this section can't be created?<
- Done. Iaof2017 (talk) 18:53, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
Charts
editWeekly charts
edit- Good
Year-end charts
editRemove US Dance/Mix Show Airplay Songs per WP:USCHARTS
Certifications
edit- Good
Release history
edit- Good
See also
edit- Good
References
edit- Copyvio score looks great at 36.3%!!!
Wikilink Apple Music on the first citation of ref 1What exactly makes ref 7 a reliable source?Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 12Remove or replace ref 14 per WP:SELFPUBWikilink TopHit on ref 52Wikilink Recorded Music NZ on ref 55
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold until all of the issues are fixed; that went smoothly! --K. Peake 09:16, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
- Hello @Kyle Peake: glad to hear from you again and thanks for your continuous work. I think I responded to everything. Cheers. Iaof2017 (talk) 19:12, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
- Iaof2017 The only problem I have now is that you have not changed Regard's elaboration quote in background to the one the source mentions, "Collaborating with Troye and Regard was an amazing experience. It's a totally different vibe than any of my usual songs, but still has the emotional and lyrical depth that I always try to write." --K. Peake 20:25, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed @Kyle Peake:. Iaof2017 (talk) 23:07, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, looks a lot better well done! --K. Peake 07:03, 25 October 2022 (UTC)