Talk:You Rock My World/GA1

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This article states that "You Rock My World" peaked at #1 in the U.S. This is not true. According to Bilboard.com, it peaked at #10: http://www.billboard.com/artist/michael-jackson/chart-history/4902#/song/michael-jackson/you-rock-my-world/3633429. Would someone who is able to edit this page please fix this error?71.3.239.222 (talk) 19:36, 11 April 2011 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 18:13, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

Overall this is a good article, though I do have a few concerns:

• "In the song reviews from Allmusic, reviewer Andrew Hamilton stated that, "If anybody other than Michael Jackson had released 'You Rock My World..." A bit confusing, maybe say "Reviewer Andrew Hamilton of Allmusic.."

 Done Crystal Clear x3 [talk] 21:55, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

• "The reviewer commented that.." Name the specific one, which I presume is Hamilton.

 Done Crystal Clear x3 [talk] 21:55, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

• "and remained within the top 100 positions for fifteen consecutive weeks from 2001 to 2002." Using dates here rather than years would work better.

 Done Crystal Clear x3 [talk] 22:00, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

• ""You Rock My World" debuted on the Finnish Singles Chart on the 40th first week of 2001, at its peak position, number two; after three weeks, the song fell off the charts." Huh? Split the After the three weeks into its own sentence, and reword the first half of the sentence. Not sure what is meant here.

 Done Crystal Clear x3 [talk] 21:59, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

• "Jackson only performed "You Rock My World" once. The first and only performance of "You Rock My World" was during a concert in early September 2001," The lead says he performed it twice; which is right?

 Done Crystal Clear x3 [talk] 21:55, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

• I don't see how File:You Rock My World Music Videp.jpg is acceptable under fair use guidelines. The illustration of the music video isn't mandatory for the reader's understanding (which I can vouch for seeing as how I just read it).

 Fixed Crystal Clear x3 [talk] 21:55, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

I'll put the article on hold for a few days and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 18:13, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

Everything looks good now, so I'll pass this article as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 22:20, 14 April 2010 (UTC)