Talk:Your Cheatin' Heart/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:00, 5 August 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• Looks, to me, as if the lead is a little too long for an article of this length (check out WP:LEAD).
• "most important standards" standards could use an appropriate link.
• "It was released in January 1953" -> "Your Cheatin' Heart" was released in...
• "topped Billboard's Country" -> "topped Billboard's Country"
• "Rolling Stone" -> Rolling Stone.
• If "Setting the Woods on Fire" was important enough to mention in Williams' string of hits, why isn't there an article, or at least redlink?
• "Williams met backstage at the Ryman Auditorium, Billie Jean Jones"->"Williams met Billie Jean Jones backstage at the Ryman Auditorium, "
• "who was at the time dating" -> "who was, at the time, dating"
• "the driver found Williams dead" could say why?
• "became quickly a hit" remove "quickly".
• "one on Billboard's Top C&W Records" -> Billboard.
• " and an "unofficial anthem" of Country Music" -> country music.
• Hank Williams chart table doesn't need to be sortable.
• Check all the other non-italics used of Billboard, e.g. in the refs.
• Refs 18 and 19 need to be fixed.
• James Brown is mentioned in the categories but not in the main article.

I'll put the article on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:51, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

All done.--GDuwenTell me! 16:07, 14 August 2013 (UTC)