Talk:Your Love (Nicki Minaj song)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 17:16, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   No edit wars. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn}

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   All are good. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn}

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Info box

• Is there no artwork? Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn}

Lead

• by Trinidadian-American recording artist → by [[Trinidadian recording artist. She was born in Trinidad, not America. Rihanna was born in Barbados and moved to America at 17, but she is not identified as Barbadian-American. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn}
• Minaj was preparing to release another single after the intended lead single from the album, "Massive Attack," failed to make an impact. → Do you mean: Minaj originally intended to release "Massive Attack" as the lead single from the album, however when the song failed commercially, "Your Love" was chosen instead. ? I'm not really sure what you mean't.
• A version of "Your Love" appeared on the Barbie World mixtape in January 2010. → Who's mixtape?
• The song peaked at fourteen on the Billboard Hot 100 and four on the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs. → The song peaked at numbers 14 and four on the US Billboard Hot 100 and Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs charts, respectively.
• the chart sans a → Do you mean "the chart as a" ?
• notably reaching number forty-three in Canada → 43 isn't very notable, I'd remove this.
• (2003), and it received positive reception which complimented its concept. → (2003). The video was praised by critics who complimented its concept.

Background

• The song's demo → "Your Love{{" 's}} demo
• mixtape in January → January 2008? 2009? 2010? 2011?
• pre-chorus → A pre-chorus is a verse.
• along with a fast sound. → What does this mean? Do you mean "faster" than the original?
• The song was mixed more and lyrically changed and was released → After being mixed differently and rewriting some of the lyrics, the song was released
• Minaj stated in an interview with Hot 93.7 that, "That was a leak and I was so upset they put it out ’cause I recorded that song like two years ago. Next thing you know, people started falling in love with it." → In an interview with Hot 83.7 radio, Minaj spoke about the leak of the song, saying "That was a leak and I was so upset they put it out 'cause I recorded that song like two years ago. Next thing you know, people started falling in love with it."
• Later on the set of the music video shoot for the song, Minaj stated that the song was stolen and leaked, explaining, → Whilst on set on the music video (link music video) for "Your Love", Minaj further explain about the song's theft and leak, saying,
• Merge the second and third paragraph as one. No need to be separated.
• on August 2 → What year!
• throughout the original song and later → remove "song", you just said it and it sounds bad.
• Unlink Pink Friday, it's already linked in the Lead.

Composition

• The song is a mid-tempo → "Your Love" is a mid-tempo
• Unlink "The More I Love You's" and Annie Lennox, have already done so in the Lead.
• on to compared the → compare, not compared. Wrong tense.
• Minaj makes several references in her lines → Minaj makes several references in her lines to well known people,
• which include references to Bruce Willis → which include Bruce Willis. Don't need to say references again
• She makes → The singer makes

Critical reception

• This section consists entirely of quotes. Can you paraphrase every other one? When you do, I will comment on this section further.

Chart performance

• on the Billboard Hot 100 at → on the US Billboard Hot 100 chart at
• , Minaj's first solo song to appear on the chart, → , becoming Minaj's first song to chart on the Hot 100 as a solo artist
• spots → positions
• (Section wide note: Double digit numbers should be written numerically)
• The next week the song jumped twenty-five spots to number twenty-six. → Did it peak at 26? Also, where is the source?
• It debuted at number twenty-three on the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs, currently peaking at number four. → It debuted at number 23 on the US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, and peaked at number four.
• The song charted on the Rap Songs chart, and eventually vaulted from number four to number one, topping the chart for eight consucutive weeks. → "Your Love" peaked at number one on the US Rap Songs chart for eight consecutive weeks.
• . also became the first → The singer became the first
• sans → ?
• (RIAA) for shipment of 1.000.000 copies of the single. → (RIAA) denoting shipments of over one million copies.
• UK Singles before UK R&B, UK R&B is a component chart and should not be mentioned first.
• It also charted and peaked at 32 on the Australian Urban Singles. → The song peaked at number 32 on the Australian Urban Singles chart.

Music video

• the "Your Love" music video by → the set of "Your Love" by
• Idolator should not be italicised, it's not news or print publication
• Nicole Sia of MTV Buzzworthy stated that the video resembles Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon in its fight scene and commented on Minaj's appearance stating "the camera cuts to Ms. Young Money soloing in front of billowing one-million-thread-count satin sheets, just to remind us how damn FINE she is." → This is a long sentence.

Credits and personnel

• Joseph Patrick Hughes, → remove the comma, redundant
• Pop Wansel & Oak of the Knightwritaz → Pop Wansel, Oak
• I think you are actually mean't to list each person and what they did individually now.

Charts

• All three tables should conform with WP:ACCESS, see Cockiness (Love It) for example. If you don't know what to do, ask me and I'll do it. Same for the relase history table as well.

References

• FN2: work parameter should be linked and say Rap-Up and the publisher parameter should say Devin Lazerine
• FN3: MTV News shouldn't be italicised and the publisher is Viacom
• FN4: Should be the same as FN2, but obviously not linked.
• FN9: Same as FN4 ^
• FN10: Same as FN4 ^
• FN12: Same as FN4 ^
• FN13: work parameter should be linked and say Billboard and the publisher should be linked and say Prometheus Global Media
• FN15: work parameter should not be italicised, should be linked and say Idolator and the publisher should be linked and say Buzz Media
• FN16: Same as FN15, but obviously not linked.

Am still doing this section. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 18:06, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

With these fixes, this article will be great. Slightly underprepared with some silly and basic mistakes, but overall not bad :). On hold for 7 days until Saturday 10th December 2011. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 18:06, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Conclusion

Was placed on hold for 7 days and has now been failed. Nominator has been online several times within the past 7 days and has made no conscious effort to address any issues. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 19:02, 10 December 2011 (UTC)

"I Love You"

the song is all over the web with the above title. was this an early/alternate/mixtape name, or just some clueless uploader? 209.172.23.30 (talk) 00:17, 22 July 2016 (UTC)