Talk:Yugoslav destroyer Zagreb/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 05:04, 6 November 2016 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:04, 6 November 2016 (UTC)
- Image properly licensed.
- External links OK, no DABs.
- Tell the reader in the lede how many ships were in the class, i.e. "second of three"
- Link: sister ship, division
- It seems a bit odd to put the crew data in the middle of the general description paragraph as it breaks up the flow. Perhaps at the end of the first paragraph?
- Short but sweet.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:29, 6 November 2016 (UTC)
- All done. I've also added a bit about a French film made about the scuttling of Zagreb. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:29, 7 November 2016 (UTC)
- Cool; I went ahead and removed a redundant cite in the description.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:42, 7 November 2016 (UTC)
- All done. I've also added a bit about a French film made about the scuttling of Zagreb. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:29, 7 November 2016 (UTC)