Talk:Zacarías el Perico/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by HHH Pedrigree in topic Spanish typos
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:45, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
Shall take on this review. MWright96 (talk) 08:45, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
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- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
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- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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Lead
edit- Delink Mexican per MOS:OVERLINK
- "For years he worked under dual identities as he also worked" - repetition of the word "worked"
- "but transitioned to working 100% as Zacarias in 2012." - working solely
Professional wrestling career
edit- "but by Mid 2007" - mid-2007,
- "he worked as a regular Mini-Estrella under the name "Atomo", although due to his very short stature did not work regularly as an active competitor." - frequently participate
Mini Máximo (2008–2012)
edit- "at times referred to as" - sometimes
- "as he defeated La Novia de Chucky ("The Bride of Chucky", who was a male masked wrestler), thus forcing La Novia de Chucky to remove his mask per the match stipulation." - defeating La Novia de Chucky ("The Bride of Chucky", a male masked wrestler) and forcing his opponent to remove his mask per match stipulation.
- "In a Ruleta de la Muerte tag teams face off in a single-elimination tournament, but unlike traditional tournaments," - repetition of tournament/tournaments
- The term Mask should be wikilinked to Wrestling mask on the first mention not the third
- "The team that loses the tag team match final" - tne word in bold should be replaced by squad to avoid close repetition of the word "team"
La Peste Negra (2011–2017)
edit- "movie series than he usually did." - film
- "and at times help them cheat during the matches." - occasionally helped them cheat during matches.
- "Rey Bucanero would leave the group when Mr. Niebla returned but Perico remained with the group" - repetition of the word "group"
- "at times referred to as Perico Zacarias." - sometimes
Micro-Estrella division (2017–present)
edit- "four weeks later the Micro-Estrellas" - This sentence should begin with a capital letter
- "Zacarias and his team once again lost to Microman's team." - repetition of the word "team"
- "Zacarias, Microman, Atomo, and Guapito took on Mije, Angelito, Chamuel, and El Gallito take on, and Zacarias." - Chamuel, El Gallito, and Zacarias.
- "Zaracias, Chamuel, and Guapito joined forces once again" - teamed up
Independent circuit (2017–present)
edit- "While working for CMLL, Zacarias, like all CMLL workers, is allowed to take independent circuit bookings on days he is not needed by CMLL." - repetition of working/workers and CMLL
- "Mije and Zacarias lose to Microman and El Gallito by disqualification." - lost
- "which featured Microman and Gallito defeating Mije and Zacarias." - saw
- Delink Mr. Niebla since he is already linked earlier in the article
References
edit- The spaced-out hyphens in the titles of the relevant references should be replaced by en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
- References 1, 9 and 10 are missing the authors of the respective articles
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator time to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 13:27, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96 everything has been addressed I think. MPJ-DK (talk) 03:10, 21 August 2020 (UTC)
- @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:24, 21 August 2020 (UTC)
Spanish typos
editI have read the article. There are some small typos in Spanish, like Atomo Átomo, cibernetico cibernético or Maximo Máximo. However, there is a big one, since it's Zacarías, not Zacarias. A name change would be needed. Also, one superluchas source calls him Zakarías. HHH Pedrigree (talk) 10:52, 21 August 2020 (UTC)