Talk:Zach Hankins/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:50, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Am reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:50, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

• • Thank you for the speedy review. Did not expect one this quick. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Early life and high school career

• Wikilink points, rebounds and shooting to their respective articles to help those unfamiliar with basketball
  • OK. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
• "In the fall of 2013," - please avoid mentioning seasons per MOS:SEASON
  • So I should just say 2013? ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
    • Preferably state the month Hankins injured his left foot or late 2013 MWright96 (talk) 19:29, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
      • Changed to late 2013, as I can't find the month but I think it was October. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 21:06, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
• "Hankins was running up the floor and stopped abruptly, breaking his foot." - you can say it was the left foot Hankins broke as stated by The Detroit News
  • Clarified. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
• "so he committed to the Bulldogs." - make it clear that Hankins committed to playing college basketball for the Bulldogs.
  • Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

College career

• Wikilink Bevo Francis Award
  • Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
• Wikilink block to Block (basketball) on the first time the term is mentioned and field goal percentage
  • Done and I already linked field goal percentage. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
• "for top small college player" - for the top
  • Good catch. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
• Wikilink National Player of the Year to NABC Player of the Year
  • OK. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
• Add a link to most valuable player for non-Basketball readers
  • Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
• "but stuck with new coach Travis Steele after Steele said Hankins was still a priority. " - remained
  • Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
• "He led the Musketeers to a 19-16 record and had 13 points, nine rebounds and two assists in a 78-76 overtime loss" - replace the hyphens with en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
  • OK. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
• "in the second round of the NIT." - the 2019 National Invitation Tournament.7
  • Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

References

• Reference 6: "Ferris State basketball wins Division II national championship, 71-69"." - en dash please
  • Fixed. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:37, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to action/respond to the queries raised here. MWright96 (talk) 16:58, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

• I have addressed your concerns. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:37, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
  • @Editorofthewiki: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 05:04, 8 April 2020 (UTC)