Talk:Zerai Deres/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Catrìona (talk · contribs) 23:20, 30 December 2018 (UTC)

This article has significant issues which cause it to be far from meeting the GA standard at this time. Some of the statements (now flagged) have more citations than necessary, which impedes readability. The prose could use improvement, especially smoothing out the many one-sentence of very brief paragraphs into running prose. In addition, the language, in places, comes off as POV, such as "act of public devotion to an important symbol of his native country". The most significant issue is the many unreliable sources cited, such as an apparently nonexistent YouTube channel (refs 22 and 23), the comments section of an online newspaper (31), a blog (37), a self-published website (53), a Facebook page used to prove the existence of the page's owner (57), a broken self-published website (40), and a slideshare presentation (50). Comments are based on this version of the article. Catrìona (talk) 23:20, 30 December 2018 (UTC)