Talk:Ziggurat (video game)

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Good articleZiggurat (video game) has been listed as one of the Video games good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starZiggurat (video game) is part of the Action Button Entertainment series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 14, 2014Good article nomineeListed
September 14, 2014Good topic candidatePromoted
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on July 14, 2014.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Tim Rogers, originator of New Games Journalism and co-founder of Action Button Entertainment, applied his thoughts on Super Mario Brothers 3's "sticky friction" to his game design for Ziggurat and Videoball?
Current status: Good article

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Is there a reason that this article includes no coverart or screenshot? Was there a copyright claim or something? Tezero (talk) 01:37, 6 June 2014 (UTC)Reply

@Tezero, Rogers is sending stuff—just working out the OTRS permissions. Thought it would be easier to wait than to delete non-free uploads. czar  03:48, 6 June 2014 (UTC)Reply
Okay. Tezero (talk) 04:22, 6 June 2014 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Ziggurat (video game)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Wirenote (talk · contribs) 16:12, 6 June 2014 (UTC)Reply

I will review your article. I am not too great at this yet, so go easy on me if I screw up. wirenote (talk) 16:12, 6 June 2014 (UTC)Reply

  • Why are there no images? I think maybe the app icon would be good to include.
Please note that images are NOT a requirement for good articles. I suggest you read this article which will help with your understanding of the criteria.--Dom497 (talk) 00:30, 9 June 2014 (UTC)Reply
I am well aware of the good article criteria and what they are not, and I was not planning to fail this article because of this. I am simply making a suggestion since most video game articles have images. wirenote (talk) 22:24, 13 June 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • Gameplay: Disambiguation link found, for pogo. Please fix
  • Is player-character usually spelled with a hyphen?
  • Link Twitter.
  • Development: After you say Tim Rogers, we do not repeat "Tim" again.
  • Please pay attention to WP:N'T. "didn't" should be "did not".
  • Reception: Please include the GameRankings aggregation in the prose as well
  • As TouchArcade is a web publication, it is not italicized
  • with arcade mechanics as "sublimely chewable ... bubblegum". I don't understand this.
  • The first mention of Joseph Leray in the text is just as "Leray" and we only learn his first name a few paragraphs later. Please fix

Overall I am satisfied with the article. Please address these and I will pass this GA nomination. wirenote (talk) 22:02, 7 June 2014 (UTC)Reply

@Wirenote, about images, see the talk page—I'm in contact with Rogers about OTRSing game assets and, you know, E3 season, etc. Player-character is used both ways—I prefer the hyphenation as less confusing. GameRankings doesn't need to be mentioned in the prose by any rule I know (and wasn't mentioned in my other GAs/FAs). TouchArcade is italicized per WP:ITALICS (which says: Online magazines, newspapers, and news sites with original content should generally be italicized)—it has little to do with whether it's a website and more with its function. If it functions like a magazine or newspaper, the work is italicized. I believe I've addressed the rest. Thanks for the review! czar  00:52, 9 June 2014 (UTC)Reply
I have seen no further issues with this article and will pass, well done. wirenote (talk) 22:24, 13 June 2014 (UTC)Reply
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