Talk:Zuo Zhuan/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:10, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:10, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

No copyvio/dablinks/external links issues detected. Issues raised in the previous review have been addressed. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

General

• Why is the title "Zho Zhuan" when the article calls it "Zho zhuan"? Even in some places in the article you say "Zhuan" and not "zhuan". Consistency is needed.

Chinese book titles generally don't capitalize every word. These should all be changed to 'zhuan'. White Whirlwind  咨  10:55, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

If it's that obvious then the page should be moved to "Zho zhuan". Are there any other articles on Chinese works where the titles are in sentence case? They would serve as precedents. Also run a Ctrl+F search to fix all those inconsistent names. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 12:41, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Ok, these have now been fixed and the page moved.  White Whirlwind  咨  18:23, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

• The prose reads very well and complies with the MOS. Good job!

Thanks! I pride myself on good encyclopedic prose. White Whirlwind  咨  10:55, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

We need more editors like you here :) Sainsf (talk · contribs) 12:41, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• thirty densely written chapters I'm not sure what "densely written" means here

Deleted. White Whirlwind  咨  10:55, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Content

• Speeches feature prominently in nearly all Zuo zhuan stories. Looks unsourced

Deleted. White Whirlwind  咨  10:55, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Themes

• "relentlessly realistic portrayal of a turbulent era marked by violence, political strife, intrigues, and moral laxity" Whose words are these?

Directly from the cited source? White Whirlwind  咨  10:55, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

@White whirlwind: Please respond. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 05:09, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

@Sainsf: Sorry, I didn't have this page watched, for some reason. Will respond very soon.  White Whirlwind  咨  06:03, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you, this can now be promoted. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:14, 27 June 2016 (UTC)