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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:39, 17 March 2019 (UTC)

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5x expanded by Lee Vilenski (talk). Self-nominated at 11:34, 11 March 2019 (UTC).


Despite being a lifelong snooker fan who watched this (thrilling and high-quality) tournament in its entirety, I have tried to review from the perspective of a general Wikipedia reader!

  • Expansion started on 8 March by Lee Vilenski. Before that it was a short article with bulleted prose and a few-sentence lead. Expansion and date criteria fulfilled.
  • Sources are reliable: BBC Sport, Eurosport and the World Snooker website, with reports written by suitably competent sports journalists.
  • Prose quality is fine, and I noticed no close paraphrasing/copyvio concerns. Instances where the phrasing is similar/identical to the source are restricted to technical terms such as "force a respotted black", which cannot really be rewritten. I can't see any errors in any of the match scores or other stats.
  • QPQ review has been done.
  • Hook facts:
    • Original hook: Supported by Eurosport live text commentary (ref [26]) and the BBC semifinals match reports (ref [21]). The wording of the hook could be enhanced to make it more accessible as follows, given that needing snookers = needing penalty points:
  • ...that Joe Perry reached his first major championship final at the 2017 Masters, despite needing penalty points to avoid elimination in the semifinals?
    • ALT 1: Supported by ref [21] again. This is my preferred hook because it is the most "surprising" of the three: winning a big match with, essentially, defective equipment. I would recommend choosing this one.
    • ALT 2: Also supported by ref [21], but the refs have got mixed up. See below. I personally prefer the other two hooks.


Refs [21] and [24] are to the same story, so should be consolidated under one name; and ref [23], currently supporting the ALT 2 hook fact, doesn't (it's covered by ref [21]/[24]). Could you just check where ref [23] (the Marco Fu interview) should be pointing to. Couple of other things: the second sentence of the first paragraph under "Final" needs to be cited (ref [28] covers it). Also, Perry would then make a fantastic break of 70 to win the match.: "fantastic" should be in quotes, but it's not actually mentioned in the source, so just reword that sentence (although it was indeed a fantastic break). Once these are resolved, I will be happy to approve this nomination. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 13:54, 13 March 2019 (UTC)

  • Thanks for reviewing Hassocks5489. I have combined the sources (I did this article in a day or two. Must have been a bit confused. The indeed reference for all of the above is indeed source 21. I hope this has covered all you need to know.
On another note, I'm glad to hear you are a Snooker fan! I am always looking for people interested in Snooker, and WP:CUE sports in general. Let me know if you would ever consider editing such articles. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 14:17, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
Thanks for making these tweaks; this is ready to go. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 21:31, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
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