Template:Did you know nominations/2017 electronics ban
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:05, 22 April 2017 (UTC)
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2017 electronics ban
edit- ... that Air India saw its bookings to America double after the United States banned most electronics from the passenger cabin for flights departing certain Middle Eastern airports? Source: [1]
- ALT1:... that some airlines affected by the United States electronics ban began offering free on-board Wifi and loan of tablets or laptops to business and first class passengers flying to the US? Source: [2][3]
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Created by Mailer diablo (talk). Self-nominated at 10:22, 12 April 2017 (UTC).
Interesting topic. New enough, long enough, cited its sources and and I didn't find any copyvio issue. I added some {{whom}} and {{which}} tags requesting for clarification, please address them before this can be approved. I prefer the first hook because it is shorter and the fact is shown in a clearer way, and it is cited and mentioned in the article. QPQ is done. HaEr48 (talk) 23:09, 15 April 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I've made some corrections, does that solve the issue now? - Mailer Diablo 01:03, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
- @Mailer diablo: Thanks, it's better now. However, I believe according to WP:AWW you should name the "media commentators" and the "aviation experts" who said it, so that the reader can assess the source of the statements. HaEr48 (talk) 03:23, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
- That's done in the body text. I think IATA on the lede alone should be sufficient as they are a major organization. - Mailer Diablo 04:17, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
Thank you. Agree that the body is sufficient. Good to go now. HaEr48 (talk) 04:44, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
