Template:Did you know nominations/A Gaelic Blessing
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:06, 15 July 2016 (UTC)
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A Gaelic Blessing
edit... that John Rutter's choral composition A Gaelic Blessing is based mostly on a Gaelic text which associates deep peace with nature?
- Reviewed: Roxana Cannon Arsht
5x expanded by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 22:06, 6 July 2016 (UTC).
- ALT1:
... that John Rutter's choral composition A Gaelic Blessing associates deep peace with nature, lyrics that are often described as being adapted from the text on a Gaelic rune?
The hook is short enough, neutral and interesting. But I can't see any source that shows that the words came from an actual text; lots of sources loosely attribute them to "an ancient Gaelic rune" which sounds suitable mystical. I have suggested an another hook. Qualifies for DYK nomination with the prose portion expanded at least fivefold. Style is compliant with policy- neutral and sourced using inline references. Checking article against source does not reveal any copyright violations or close paraphrasing. QPQ has been met. Drchriswilliams (talk) 22:29, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for looking, and ALT1, but I am afraid that gets to complicated. How is this? (The composer is not linked on purpose. In articles, we don't link to a composer when the piece has an article, to avoid a "sea of blue", and for DYK we want to focus on the article in question.)
- ALT2: ... that John Rutter's choral composition A Gaelic Blessing associates "deep peace" with elements of nature? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:45, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for the explanation, I wasn't sure why you hadn't linked to Rutter himself. ALT2 manages to be interesting, get key information across and still remain concise. Good to go. Drchriswilliams (talk) 22:57, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
