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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 12:34, 28 August 2014 (UTC)

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A Kitty Bobo Show

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  • ... that the titular character of A Kitty Bobo Show was based on the creators' experiences as Korean adoptees?

Moved to mainspace by 23W (talk). Self nominated at 05:00, 22 August 2014 (UTC).

  • WP:NOTCENSORED notwithstanding, I don't think the hook should refer to a character's titulars, especially what with this being a children's cartoon and all. EEng (talk) 23:26, 22 August 2014 (UTC)
    • hehe. Fixed. 23W 23:39, 22 August 2014 (UTC)
ALT2 ... that the eponymous character of A Kitty Bobo Show was based on one of the co-creator's experience as a Korean adoptee?
I didn't really think anything needed changing -- I just like being naughty. I think title character would be fine too. EEng (talk) 00:39, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
  • Yeah, but you're right that it sounds a bit lewd. Unless you think that would drive people to click... 23W 02:52, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
Both, though the word I would have used is titillating. EEng (talk) 13:23, 23 August 2014 (UTC)

@EEng: Thanks for the laughs. If you're not busy, do you think you'd be able to give this a full review? I'd like to get this in the prep within the week as the Kickstarter is close to a week from ending; I know about WP:NOTADVERTISING and all, but I think it'd be a bummer to have this run too late. 23W 21:18, 23 August 2014 (UTC)

Ouch. I hate to tell you this, but from what I can see this article is nowhere near the 5X requirement. Am I mixed up? If I am, what are the "before" and "after" dates for the expansion? Right now I'm seeing about 2X from May until now. EEng (talk) 21:56, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
Naw, this was moved from my userspace. 23W 22:04, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
Wait a minute. Hold on. I'm all confused now. Just a sec while I check. EEng (talk) 22:35, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
It was moved with this edit. 23W 22:38, 23 August 2014 (UTC)

I had lost my mind for a minute there -- I think I was looking at the wrong change history. Anyway... Review: NewlongcitesnoBLPnocopyvio. The hook cites to a source which gives --

Kitty Bobo's creators -- Kevin Kaliher and his wife Meaghan Dunn-Kaliher -- are both Korean adoptees. Kevin Kaliher says that much of the impetus for Kitty Bobo came while traveling in Korea in search of his birth family.

--and I think it's reasonable to interpret that as the hook's "based on one of the co-creator's experience as a Korean adoptee". Clear for takeoff. (Before anyone notices and makes a fuss, please cite the Synopsis section i.e. cite the pilot episode itself.)

Unrelated to this review, however... I'm concerned that the linked article Korean adoptee is a bit, er, rambling -- and why don't we have 250 articles: "Russian adoptee", "German adoptee", "Mexican adoptee", "US adoptee" and so on? EEng (talk) 23:11, 23 August 2014 (UTC)

Tweaked the hook to encompass both creators. 23W 23:28, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
Still GTG. EEng (talk) 00:02, 24 August 2014 (UTC) Stop tweaking the titulars or I'm gonna report you.
  • Am I missing something? Is there a review here? Yoninah (talk) 14:13, 24 August 2014 (UTC)

I was on dialup so I made it really brief. Bolded above. EEng (talk) 14:29, 24 August 2014 (UTC)

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