- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:29, 14 July 2018 (UTC)
Advanced Cell Therapeutics
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that Advanced Cell Therapeutics sold fraudulent stem cell therapy to desperate people starting in 2002, and that its CEO fled the US and is on the FDA's Most Wanted list? Source: source, source)
- ALT1:... that ...? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
Created by Jytdog (talk). Self-nominated at 00:53, 4 June 2018 (UTC).
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☆ Bri (talk) 21:51, 9 July 2018 (UTC)
- Review in progress ☆ Bri (talk) 05:28, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- Struck "reviewed" page. I thought commenting = reviewing but i guess not! Sorry. Jytdog (talk) 05:39, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- We might have some neutrality problems with ALT1. For instance, "critically ill" and patients "with the poorest prognosis" were used in the ABC source provided, not "desperate". Also "alleged fraudsters" in the ABC headline, not flat-out "fraudulent". I'd go so far as to say "untested stem-cell therapies on people with incurable diseases". Could you propose an ALT2 that addresses this? ☆ Bri (talk) 14:53, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- Am saying "conditions" as spinal cord injury isn't a disease, really... Jytdog (talk) 15:04, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- Struck out original hook and ALT2. Am willing to sign off on ALT3 as neutral and fully sourced. Also I find moving "most wanted list" to the front to increase interest of the item. Until I saw this nomination, I didn't know there existed an FDA Most Wanted List. Jytdog, do you like this hook? ☆ Bri (talk) 19:03, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- That is a very fine hook! I have had real world stuff today; will get my other review done this evening. Jytdog (talk) 21:11, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
- btw, I didn't know the FDA had a most wanted list either, before I worked on that. :) very hooky! Thanks for creating the page on it, Natureium! Jytdog (talk) 05:02, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
- I did a first pass review, Template:Did you know nominations/Sven (Frozen)... not sure if I did that right. Jytdog (talk) 05:00, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
- User:Bri just checking; does the first pass review I did "count" or do I need to work all the way through it? I am not in any hurry but don't know what is correct and don't want to be stallig things in my ignorance. Jytdog (talk) 05:47, 7 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Jytdog: As a formality, please add the citation that backs the hook in ALT3 using Source: xxxx. ☆ Bri (talk) 18:21, 9 July 2018 (UTC)
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Done, thanks. Jytdog (talk) 18:53, 9 July 2018 (UTC)
- ALT3 hook citations confirmed, I am marking this passed. Sorry about the delay. ☆ Bri (talk) 21:51, 9 July 2018 (UTC)
☆ Bri (talk) 21:51, 9 July 2018 (UTC)
