Template:Did you know nominations/Agneta Matthes & Agneta Park

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The result was: promoted by Rcsprinter (message) @ 15:29, 25 July 2012 (UTC)

Agneta Matthes, Agneta Park

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... that Agneta Matthes had Agneta Park named after herself after helping to develop it?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Iowa Women's Hall of Fame

Created/expanded by Thine Antique Pen (talk). Self nom at 08:12, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

QPQ is good in this case.
Agneta Matthes is new enough and big enough. But translation needs work.
Agneta Park is new enough Graeme Bartlett (talk) 11:15, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

The park is just big enough, I had one pass with this rationale earlier. ⇒T A P 11:20, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

agree the park article is large enough! Graeme Bartlett (talk) 11:47, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

I am working on the translation, see only now that it is nominated for DYK. I suggest to describe in the hook that Agneta Park is not a park, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:40, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

I am done with the translation, would like to see a picture and a different hook, will think about alternatives, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:59, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that Agneta Matthes and her husband (pictured), who ran factories in Delft producing yeast, perfume and margarine, developed a workers' housing area in garden city style, Agneta Park?

I imagine the picture to be cropped a bit, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:08, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

Done Br'er Rabbit (talk) 20:58, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:07, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

--Gerda Arendt (talk) 05:34, 17 July 2012 (UTC)

Both at this point are new enough based on time of nomination and long enough based on time of nomination. Agneta Park is fully supported by sources. Hook is neutral enough and formatted properly. QPQ done. Both articles appear neutral enough.
Agneta Matthes is not fully supported by sources. In Agneta Matthes, hooked fact not cited.
Hooked fact appears to suggest she tried to get the park named after herself. The article doesn't suggest she was behind the article naming. Can alt be proposed which avoids the suggestion she named it after herself? --LauraHale (talk) 10:07, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

Referenced. I'd go with ALT1. ⇒T A P 10:15, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

Still not fully sourced. Added fact tags for missing places.

ALT1: ... that Agneta Matthes and her husband (pictured), who ran factories in Delft producing yeast, perfume and margarine, developed a workers' housing area in garden city style, Agneta Park?

Alt1 Hooked fact supported by sources. --LauraHale (talk) 10:30, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

Done. ⇒T A P 10:31, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

Good to go for ALT1. --LauraHale (talk) 10:39, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

Using that but without picture. Rcsprinter (message) @ 15:29, 25 July 2012 (UTC)