- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 17:18, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
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Ahmet Abakay
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- ... that after 82 years of silence, the mother of journalist Ahmet Abakay (both pictured) revealed her Armenian identity to her son just weeks before she died?
- Reviewed: Crenshaw (mixtape)
- Comment: I also have a picture of Ahmet Abakay alone which is in PD as well. However, the current photograph suits the hook better.
Created by Proudbolsahye (talk). Self nominated at 08:14, 15 October 2013 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, and the reference checks out. However, I feel that the hook is a little too long, and it should be shortened into something more concise. The article's prose also feels a little stilted, but I think for this nomination that's a non-issue. --Sky Harbor (talk) 10:07, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that after 82 years of silence, the mother of journalist Ahmet Abakay (both pictured) revealed her Armenian identity just weeks before she died?
- @Sky Harbor:, I added an ALT1. I removed the 'from her son' part. That might of caused a little confusion and I now have it shortened. Proudbolsahye (talk) 18:35, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
- That's better. :) Now it's
good to go. --Sky Harbor (talk) 05:40, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
- That's better. :) Now it's
