- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allecher (talk) 17:45, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
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Andrew Szczerba
edit- ... that American football tight end Andrew Szczerba, who attended Penn State, was recruited by eventual Penn State head coach Bill O'Brien while he was still at Duke?
Created by Go Phightins! (talk). Self nominated at 21:37, 23 April 2013 (UTC).
- Open to any alternate hooks; possibly one about his uncle if this one is deemed unsatisfactory. Thanks! Go Phightins! 21:38, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
- Date, length and references all check. No signs of obvious bias. The fact implied in the hook is interesting, though the wording of the hook isn't sitting well with me for some reason. I'm trying to come up with alternate wording. How about
- ALT1 ... that whilst he was working at Duke University, eventual Penn State American football head coach Bill O'Brien tried to recruit Andrew Szczerba, who attended Penn State?
- I'm open to alternate hooks as well, that's the best I can do right now and I won't be offended if anyone doesn't like it. Freikorp (talk) 03:31, 18 May 2013 (UTC)
