- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:47, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
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Apple Pay
edit- ... that The Verge predicts Apple Pay will do to the mobile payments market what the iPhone did to the smartphone market?
- Reviewed: Don't Shit Your Pants
Created by Czar (talk). Self nominated at 23:26, 15 September 2014 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough, is neutral and unpromotive and I detected no other policy issues. However I don't think the hook is borne out by the article although it probably is by the source (the jargon makes the source difficult to fully understand). In the article the comment is about the announcement of Apple Pay rather than the service itself. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:05, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
- @Cwmhiraeth, thanks for the review. I wasn't completely sure what you meant, but I think I fixed it—take a look? czar ♔ 15:06, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
Yes, that covers the problem I was alluding to. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:31, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
