Template:Did you know nominations/Association of Iranian Journalists

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 01:44, 11 November 2013 (UTC)

Association of Iranian Journalists

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... that ~~systematic~~ harassment initiated against the Association of Iranian Journalists by the administration of Mahmoud Ahmadinejad culminated in the closure of the organization in August 2009?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/David Ong

Created by Plot Spoiler (talk). Self nominated at 17:38, 9 November 2013 (UTC).

- Hook, length, sourcing, new article, etc, check out. I suggest striking adjective "systematic" in the hook because both the article and source do not claim the harassment was systematic. --Mike Cline (talk) 17:16, 10 November 2013 (UTC)

Thanks. Regarding your reservations in using the term "systematic", did you see what this source [1] said? "Systematic harassment of the Association of Iranian Journalists by President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad’s government took a new turn on 24 June when labour minister Mohammad Jahromi threatened to dissolve the organisation." Plot Spoiler (talk) 00:03, 11 November 2013 (UTC)