Template:Did you know nominations/Asthall barrow

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:24, 28 July 2019 (UTC)

Asthall barrow

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Created by Usernameunique (talk). Self-nominated at 23:58, 15 June 2019 (UTC).

  • Page is uncategorised. A talk page must be created and relevant wikiproject templates must be added. RRD (talk) 05:26, 23 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Royroydeb, thanks for taking on this review. Categories added, talk page created, and wikiprojects assigned. --Usernameunique (talk) 12:05, 23 June 2019 (UTC)
Newly created article, article over 1500 charatcers, QPQ done, article follows guidelines, well cited and interesting hook. RRD (talk) 05:32, 30 June 2019 (UTC)
@Usernameunique: The hook facts are mentioned in the single sentence but uncited lead, but not elsewhere. The last sentence in the "Excavation" section is uncited and the article gives the impression of being unfinished because it does not indicate what was found during the excavations nor why it is deduced that a high-status individual was buried in the barrow. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:31, 9 July 2019 (UTC)
Cwmhiraeth, I've added some more to the article (and appropriate citations); I'll eventually add more, but I believe the current additions addresses the points that you raise above. --Usernameunique (talk) 23:59, 27 July 2019 (UTC
  • Thank you. Replacing tick now that these matters have been dealt with. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:05, 28 July 2019 (UTC)