- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:20, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
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Büşra Kuru
... that German-born Turkish international Büşra Kuru began playing football at age six encouraged by her footballer brother, who took her to the sports field every day?Source: "Unsere 'Neuen' - Büsra Kuru 21.06.2019 11:27 - Seit 13 Jahren spielt sie nun schon Fußball - ihr Bruder, der ebenfalls Fussball spielte, hat sie dazu bewegt, da sie durch ihn tagtäglich auf dem Sportplatz war." (in German) [1]
- Reviewed: Bangs
Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 11:33, 26 September 2020 (UTC).
Interesting career beginning, on good sources, Turkish sources accepted AGF, and I can read the German. I think the hook would be quirkier if you said the same thing by first talking about the initiation, and then that she plays in a German club and the Turkish national team. Try it, - if I do I can't review. "football[er]" needs the same link as in the article, to clarify which kind. - Article: we'll get there, but some things need to change. All hook facts need a ref right after the sentence, that's at present "beginning at age six", and the brother thing. I am no friend of the extra short sections, and one section header is funny ;) - A red link to Poland looks strange ;) (please pipe) - Do we know when she began playing for her hometown team? - Please get rid of "currently" which may be wrong next year. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:23, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for your review. I tried to address the ıssues you mentioned, and added following ALT1. Please recheck. Unfortunately, I could not locate the "funny" section header. CeeGee
- ALT1 ... that Büşra Kuru began playing football at age six encouraged by her footballer brother, who took her to the sports field every day, plays in a German club and is a member of the Turkey national team? CeeGee 02:19, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you! The funny header is 2.2.2. - My wording would be
- ... that Büşra Kuru, who began playing football every day at age six, encouraged by her brother, is a member of a German club and of the the Turkey national team?
--Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:04, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for your review. I tried to address the ıssues you mentioned, and added following ALT1. Please recheck. Unfortunately, I could not locate the "funny" section header. CeeGee
